I'm so happy you posted, right when I'm waiting for a doctor's appointment. Thanks for the long chapter!

Cool chapter, glad you returned on this

This is good

Makes sense that Yamato feels right at home among the slavers and oppressors of Along's crew. It must be like being back home.

Good chapter. Glad to see Luffy get humbled. He might beat the system, but Mihawk will squash Monkey D Fraud. Nami was a liability and Sanji was useless, just like canon.

loved the chapter!

Dude, my heart sake so fast it went out my ass. Crude joke aside, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Aww, Mihawk kinda a ass ngl.
Whens Arlong getting beaten up tho

Great chapter wonderful

ok apparently vivre cards commonly end up being wrong so disregard previous comment i guess

love this story and excited for the next chapter but small note im pretty sure according to vivre cards mihawk is confirmed to not have conquerors haki

Nice!

well that was stupid, unfollowed lol

I'm sure you're wondering why a man such as me is hunting you?

Luffy: New Fone who dis

Dang I was not expecting Hawkeye to to con Luffy into defeat.

Hopefully Nami at least understands Luffy is her friend now.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Thank you for sharing your writing with us, as always! I loved reading this chapter! :D