Reviews for Harry Potter: Thinking like a Thief |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the old fart was asking for it for setting up Harry in the first place |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cut off the head, burn the body, look for any horcruxes, don't be complacent. But aside from that very good job! Couldn't think of a more appropriate method of a surekill in close range than a gun... unless dumbledore was prepared for such a scenario and was prepared to fake dying to let anyone who might try that let their guard down? Can't put it past the guy, given how much of a schemer he is. PLS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "reignite" should be one word. As should be "desensitized". "know-it-all" needed hyphens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yum! at the thought of that spaghetti carbonara Harry is cooking for his dinner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() michael borune: im impressed harry tricky assignment but you did what had to be done i know murder is wrong but if you hadnt killed albus he would've done a lot worse than framming you excellent work potter stargate time traveller keep up the good work on updating this fic andf thinking like a thief 10 star foer this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, I was expecting you to keep dumbledore around a while longer as the villain, so it will be interesting where you take the story next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No ranting, no monologuing, just decisive (and not drawn out) action to end a threat... I like it, I like it alot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() May I suggest Dobby poisoning the old coot? Since he can obviously get to the office unnoticed.. Dumbasdoor is too dangerous to be left alive apparently |
![]() ![]() ![]() END THIS GUY'S WHOLE CAREER MAN DESTROY HIS REPUTATION, HIS LEGACY, HIS NAME PLS |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant for Harry to say "it's the start". And you meant that Harry "dumped him uncermoniously on a sofa". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant for Harry to think and prof. Marchbanks to say "Calming Draughts" and "calming draughts", not "Calming Droughts" or "calming droughts". |
![]() ![]() ![]() You meant "a few yoga and pilates moves". "better-trained" needed a hyphen because it's a compound adjective describing the noun "wizards". You meant for the Fat Lady to say "Haven't you heard". You meant for Harry to say "You set them up, didn't you?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done, Harry's house elves, and well done, Harry. |