Reviews for Naruto ANBU-maki
marquis.shax chapter 31 . 7/1/2024
is this story abandoned or what as you haven't touched it in a year same with a few of your other stories that aren't marked as finished
Binge Reader chapter 2 . 6/22/2024
And that's how it kills all of the buildup. Fuck and you and your retarded plot.
Markan999 chapter 1 . 5/17/2024
Any fic that doesn't feature bashing is my thing. I like it
Lo wyatt chapter 3 . 3/13/2024
Imagine how manny normal clone’s Naruto could make
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2024
What's wrong with people like harem? I am a girl and i hate sharing. This story so good but when i know this story will be harem... I hate harem
candel06 chapter 31 . 11/4/2023
Very much enjoying the story so far. Very curious to see how things progress, keep up the great work. See ya in the next installment, Ja Ne!
shinghidorah chapter 1 . 10/26/2023
it's...very difficult to read past the earlier chapters because of the way you write emotional expressions and impressions for the characters.

i don't know if you have a beta-reader or not, but you might consider having one to smoothen your writing and story.

this is a very interesting fic, i really like what you did here. but i can only read up to chapter 15 before stopping as it hurts my head due to the errors and inconsistencies present in each chapters.
Binge Reader chapter 1 . 10/14/2023
Katana doesn't fit for a Ninja. The closest thing to Katana they can use is a Wakizashi. Then again, we have people like Zabuza in this world.
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 31 . 9/14/2023
Hope to get a flashback to the clones time with Anko.
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 17 . 9/13/2023
I'm laying odds on Temari
dastewie2012 chapter 11 . 9/8/2023
Actually very accurate for an*l. It takes a huge amount of prep work to do it. A plug and lube to loosen up, then even more lube during. Cause it genuinely does hurt the girl a lot and ripping does happen a decent amount of the time even with prep work. So if uou do an*l spontaneously she’s really the one who chose to not you lol
dastewie2012 chapter 8 . 9/7/2023
I love the nonchalants due to familiarity.
dastewie2012 chapter 6 . 9/7/2023
This story is covers some really nice logic holes in the anime.
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 3 . 9/6/2023
Isn't Naruto, Hinata and Yakumo a bit too young to be sexually active? (without the sex). After all, they're only 12 aren't they. Sure I was thinking about sex at 11, but I never acted on it, until I was 19. By then I was already an adult. *has a thoughtful expression while also raising my eyebrow*
bigbadpeter91 chapter 31 . 7/5/2023
enjoying the story
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