Reviews for Naruto ANBU-maki |
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![]() ![]() ![]() is this story abandoned or what as you haven't touched it in a year same with a few of your other stories that aren't marked as finished |
![]() ![]() And that's how it kills all of the buildup. Fuck and you and your retarded plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any fic that doesn't feature bashing is my thing. I like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imagine how manny normal clone’s Naruto could make |
![]() ![]() What's wrong with people like harem? I am a girl and i hate sharing. This story so good but when i know this story will be harem... I hate harem |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very much enjoying the story so far. Very curious to see how things progress, keep up the great work. See ya in the next installment, Ja Ne! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's...very difficult to read past the earlier chapters because of the way you write emotional expressions and impressions for the characters. i don't know if you have a beta-reader or not, but you might consider having one to smoothen your writing and story. this is a very interesting fic, i really like what you did here. but i can only read up to chapter 15 before stopping as it hurts my head due to the errors and inconsistencies present in each chapters. |
![]() ![]() Katana doesn't fit for a Ninja. The closest thing to Katana they can use is a Wakizashi. Then again, we have people like Zabuza in this world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to get a flashback to the clones time with Anko. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm laying odds on Temari |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually very accurate for an*l. It takes a huge amount of prep work to do it. A plug and lube to loosen up, then even more lube during. Cause it genuinely does hurt the girl a lot and ripping does happen a decent amount of the time even with prep work. So if uou do an*l spontaneously she’s really the one who chose to not you lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the nonchalants due to familiarity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is covers some really nice logic holes in the anime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Isn't Naruto, Hinata and Yakumo a bit too young to be sexually active? (without the sex). After all, they're only 12 aren't they. Sure I was thinking about sex at 11, but I never acted on it, until I was 19. By then I was already an adult. *has a thoughtful expression while also raising my eyebrow* |
![]() ![]() ![]() enjoying the story |