Reviews for Invictus
ZhaWarudo chapter 19 . 11/29/2022
you said rin burned water, now she likes cooking
Guest chapter 26 . 11/27/2022
The name of the jutsu is shuriken bunshin no jutsu.
ZhaWarudo chapter 16 . 11/29/2022
impression not expression
ZhaWarudo chapter 11 . 11/29/2022
At least he's trying to fix Sasuke. If there's anything he learned from Uchiha massacre, it should be fuck canon. Big things will stay the same, he should do what is right.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/27/2022
Yin is spiritual. The greater spirituality, the greater yin a person has. Yin isn’t mental energy. Yin chakra deals more the soul than the body.
Sir John Constantine chapter 58 . 11/28/2022
NGL, the way you made Sasuke and Itachi's relationship is realistic as hell. The scene where Sasuke rubbed Itachi's stupidity in his face was satisfying, to say the least, and it would be best if Rin just respects the fact Sasuke wants nothing to do with his brother. Every time I find a story where Sasuke learns the truth behind the Uchiha Massacre, he goes after Danzo while giving Itachi a free pass, which pisses me off because it's cliche as hell. It's hard finding a story where instead of going, "Fuck Danzo for making Itachi kill our clan," He simply goes, "Cool story, still genocide," and just holds Itachi accountable for his actions. Either too many authors are hardcore Itachitards or they're simply too spineless to do so.
Guest chapter 58 . 11/26/2022
I see you're still tryna peddle that rin/sasuke crap. Her and Shikamaru are more unique than a genderbent naruto/sasuke pairing. Like the forcefullness of this pairing is mindblowing even if you try to back off, you've shown your hand.

Even this Training Arc why do they all need to go together. You can say so Jiraiya can keep an eye on Itachi, or even help with training, but they(itachi&sasuke) could have stayed in the village. Really idk why they should leave the village anyway with all that going on with "Tobi". Them leaving was just a plot point to keep sasuke near rin

Like you're having her be extra defensive of him among other things. Even the little kiss that happened in canon you made that happen with her. Now he acts like he needs to be protective of her and crap. I don't dislike sasuke, in this fic he's using her as a crutch period. Creating tension for tensions sake

Like I said in a previous review she should've either been with Shikamaru or been a lesbian. Or better yet not even have a pairing.
ZhaWarudo chapter 3 . 11/28/2022
"You're safe"
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26/2022
Think of genjutsu henge (d rank jutsu not a lot of chakra is used plus it uses yin chakra and cannon naruto doesn’t really know how to use yin chakra that well because the senju and uzumaki clans aren’t around anymore to teach naruto to chip away at their yin weaknesses) as a gas planet vs solid henge(s rank for the amount of chakra to fuel the henge plus cannon naruto has a lot of yang chakra to fuel this jutsu) as a solid planet.
ZhaWarudo chapter 1 . 11/28/2022
lol the fact you had to specify no incest
Guest chapter 5 . 11/26/2022
Do naruto and rin become fuuin masters and fuuin combat masters like the uzumaki clan and surpass them and their parents? No one would see a fuuin battle coming. They are used to weapons, taijutsu, ninjutsu, genjutsu, and iryojutsu like chakra scalpels and poisons.
LionComet chapter 33 . 11/27/2022
damn it a Warframe reference...
luiseduardob303 chapter 16 . 11/26/2022
I hope Rin doesn't end up with Sasuke, an OC or Haku would be better
DevilOlantern chapter 11 . 11/26/2022
Aight, Im tapping out here. The massacare happening is the breakinh point with the SI doing absolutely fucking nothing.
PasiveNox chapter 58 . 11/26/2022
nice chapter great
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