Reviews for Invictus
Hit1903 chapter 3 . 12/30/2020
Why doesn't he remember. It would be too boring if he doesn't remember anything worthwhile
Val'Hor chapter 1 . 12/27/2020
This looks promising but there are too many flashbacks, I think it would be better to give the scenes in the chronological order than going back all the time. Your flashbacks take so many words that what you used to introduce them becomes unnecessary filler. Keep up the good work, there doesn't seem to be any problem with you grammar or your writing in general.
jasonlabroy chapter 1 . 12/27/2020
Deep
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