Reviews for Invictus
theeelderman5 chapter 8 . 8/29/2023
theeelderman5 chapter 8 . 8/29/2023
ahhh so much exposition and world building it feels like I'm trapped like when your trying to move but your just floating being blocked by some stretchy mucus or something
theeelderman5 chapter 7 . 8/29/2023
I really wish boyo had some kind of cheat or just started meta knowledging with the fox can't you just say something about the vision and how Naruto was the prophecy child thing and just get some compliance with the fox
theeelderman5 chapter 4 . 8/24/2023
wtf is even going on right now YIKES no real pacing just going through motions constantly changing and all that
theeelderman5 chapter 1 . 8/24/2023
I need a fucking fic where the OC fucked hinata I need smut some fucking timesss
acowles02 chapter 19 . 8/22/2023
What fic is this “heel grabber” from?
yasserkend8 chapter 17 . 8/7/2023
One of the best chapters in this story, the fights were absolutely amazing, this story is soo good
hitsdifferent chapter 15 . 7/31/2023
why would the rasengan be in the scroll, it isnt a kinjutsu
hitsdifferent chapter 10 . 7/31/2023
Guest chapter 59 . 6/27/2023
was this posted before ? i swear ive read this before
Cevandri chapter 59 . 6/29/2023
Jeez been reading this the past few days, quite good story keep it up
trailqouta chapter 1 . 6/29/2023
Damnnn lov this fic
Visual Bliss chapter 6 . 6/27/2023
At least say the entire word 'Shodaime' when referring to the first hokage lol but seriously both hiruzen and kakashi need to stop projecting just because one kid is talented in their eyes
Visual Bliss chapter 5 . 6/27/2023
Okay I remember why I dropped this now... Once the MC realized where he was he immediately decides to follow what he knows which while understandable is somewhat disappointing.. I don't know I would not want to be mindlessly loyal to a village that is filled to the brim with people who hate but will come to 'love' me later on when it starts to be convenient
Visual Bliss chapter 4 . 6/27/2023
Except you will do all you can to make his life difficult lol orochimaru is his own problems.. Hiruzen needs to stop projecting his fears onto a child who hasn't lived his life yet especially when he doesn't remember anything until now
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