|Reviews for Deadly Belladonna|
| SlowestTurtle chapter 3 . 3h
Grammar 6/10 but creativity 10/10. Muggle vanishing ink in a magical contract. I fucking love it.
| Stratre chapter 18 . 8/14
ah damn i love this i really hope too see more of bella soon though maybe a few dates? some outings together take her shopping or on a picnic something to build their "courting" into a relationship
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/2
This Tory is very good. And more than many of the other fanficyions!
I hope to see more of this story soon, so I'll be following it...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 18 . 7/26
And now colour me baffled... I'm so lost... I was loving this story and now I don't know... I hate 'New and Improved' - It usually means 'it was perfect and selling well - then we found cheaper ingredient's that weren't as good but were cheaper' You're story was perfect, purring along, sweet as a coffee with ten sugars... and you changed the sugar for sweeteners, and the fresh milk for powdered creamer...
So it tastes off...
I'm not sure if I like it anymore? The 1926 seems... off, like another story... I'll stick with it but I'm not sure I like this twist...
| jaqmaq77 chapter 12 . 7/26
UK - British... our marshmallows are different and don't toast... and S'mores... forget it, to us, British, one of Luna's strange creatures.
No such thing as a Graham cracker... And we get real beer, not young ladies wee knocked sick... And no blocks, unless it's a block of flats... so it's not, two blocks over... it's next street but one, or simply the second street on the left (or right)... and no sidewalks... we walk on pavement's and pathways... We ain't allowed air-guns never mind real guns... and if we carry a knife we are going from the kitchen to the table to eat dinner. (or returning the knife to the kitchen sink to wash it.)
| jaqmaq77 chapter 9 . 7/26
I loved that chapter so much... Oh, and please... someone bitch-slap Dumbledore...
| SamonIllmantrim chapter 2 . 7/20
I don't know if I've read this one before, or commented before, but I just wanted to comment and say these first two chapters are absolutely brilliant. Your characterization, your story beats, your drama, your conversation... all of it... absolutely brilliant!
| Wally991 chapter 18 . 7/19
I just ñove the dynamic between Narcissa, Bella and Harris
| Rio47 chapter 18 . 7/9
Awesome story mate I couldn't stop reading.
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/27
Fantastic fic. Absolutely fantastic.
A well done take on time travel harry, with a darker slant while not falling into the more cringe worthy or outright strange trends seen in the … genre(?) that are Harry Potter Black family time travel
| Haku's Lover18 chapter 18 . 6/21
Interesting story so far. I’m enjoying it well. Can’t wait for more!
| Haku's Lover18 chapter 4 . 6/21
I like the Star Wars Sabacc reference. It’s my favorite game in Knights of the Old Republic.
| Phazer12 chapter 18 . 6/21
Ohh, this is going to be quite mysterious. May it be that Harry or Luna met with Queenie in the past and became pseudo friends. After all, Queenie is always shown to be kind of an anti-villain. But that's it, When later on Harry Potter and his news via Harris Black became frontpage, or his photo with Luna became viral; Queenie who might be somewhere else saw and realized what might be happening. Maybe or the past duo have hidden something which is the key to the return of Grindelwald.
| Airiles'Malfoy chapter 18 . 6/18
| Morizo chapter 1 . 6/6
Continua! Por favor!