good ending really tied everything together

Great story fromstart to finish.
Next to best part the story was actually completed.

Good story, later sections got a bit weird. Think you had a lot of potential with Sasuke & Naruto being like Madara and Hashirama, but it didn’t real pay off by letting them fight together. I’m sure that would’ve been hard to do but it also would’ve been very epic. The ending is also pretty anti-climatic. No big fights, no clear ending. Just kinda stutters off

Awesome you very much for finishing it! I had a great time reading it

Hello, author I hope you read this soon. Because I tried reading chapter 7 of this story. Naruto: corrupted, and for some reason, it's not showing up, the whole page is blank white. It would be great if you could fix that.

Well at least danzo is dead now, Naruto and Sasuke just killed him anyways in the end so all that trouble was pointless. What an annoying few chapters those were

Shitty how nobody kills danzo even when the 3rd told jiraiya to do it. And now he's hokage and having Naruto commit genocide and everyone just accepts it instead of doing something when half of them know he started the invasion

You're telling me Tsunade isn't fast enough to stop some random Anbu from taking Shizune and leaving to the leaf, she just stands there and dosent put up any fight? Tf

The plot is excellent. The ending is crap. Why!?

he acts so smartly but in reality is a dumb ass

Honestly, I'm not satisfied with the ending. well, this is indeed an extraordinary story but readers can be disappointed with the ending, right? I'm not satisfied with the solution Naruto chose. I also don't really like his choice of women. I don't like all the power he has. he has all the strongest powers until his character seems too exaggerated. the author really wanted to make an invincible naruto character and that annoyed me a little. It's up to the writer to create the characters but readers can complain, right?

The grammar in this fic was often kinda bad, the dialogue often felt like robots speaking to each other, and the pacing for a lot the story was pretty awkward. Regardless, I still enjoyed this fic a lot and it's honestly one of my favourites.

There's always people like Kurotsuchi here in every story, they never understand that they create their own enemies. 99% of the time, the only reason why they have threats is because they're the ones who threatened them in the first place.

Encantador
Perfecto

Fue Perfecto
Maravilloso