Reviews for Naruto: Corrupted |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you remain one of the Legends on this app. Thank you for this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay story ! ! ! |
![]() ![]() Enryuo i know u reading this so update your story hehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fanfic u wrote there, i am fine with the way you want it to end, so great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() and I'm done both Naruto and sasuke individually could just kill danzo and get away with it cause of the Lord so this is just stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, this is the ending? Nooooo! Xd Just kidding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome ending! But i agree with the others and i feel an Epilogue would be the best way to end it...It doesn't need to be a long one, just some small slice of life of Naruto and Ino's family and a Sasuke as Hokage... |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter ...i think the ending is great... the story overall was great ... please update Naruto the greatest story also |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I hope there might be a very different kind of ending to the story. Let's see what the future holds up. I like to say that your writing style is very impressive. I know that this story might be racing towards its end. I wonder what kind of Naruto story you will do next. Whether you will try to make a new story or concentrate on your ongoing stories is upto you. But since you are a author for a long time, you should have read a lot of stories. One such topic is Naruto abandoned fics. Most of the fics remains cliche and incomplete. Some good fics in this topic too remains unfinished. I hope you will do some good to this topic, since I believe you have the potential to give a great fic. You can just take this as a challenge to do a abandoned fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad that it's ending but I enjoyed the ride. Though I hope for an epilogue for some looser ends or a notes on what u planned to do or scrapped. Thanks again |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fantastic ride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for writing this wonderful saga. But i think an epilogue is needed. Just 2 or 3 thousands words about Naruto and Sasuke and the condition of Elemental Nation 5 or 10 years in the future is enough. Just as there is a Prologue, epilogue is needed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is your best ending so far. You've come a long way. An epilogue would've been cool, describing a normal day of Narutos life with his family 10 years later, because that was his dream. Sasuke's dream was being Hokage, so a scene of that would be cool too. Regardless, thank you for another interesting story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a hell of alot better than when you ended things the first time! Lol. I like this conclusion evwn though part of me wishes for more. In the end I think your story had too much going on and you ended up backed into a corner with limited options amd limited time. Your creative brain worked against you this time my good sir. Still with Naruto and Ino riding off into a somewhat sunset I can accept this. Thank you for your work. Glad to of seen this story from literal beginning to end. |