"fifty (50)"

What tf is this? Why write the number twice? I've never seen something as stupid and pointless as this in all the years I've been reading fanfiction.

This was too AU for my tastes. Zero-morphic material, hidden salarian technology, and I suspect some reaper technology as well in the next chapter. It's just too much.

well I guess you're dead or something if the lack of updates mean anything

Good they deserved to be destroyed for trying to force someone to be a client race

*giggles*

This is really wholesome.

Love it

Once you let aliens into your forces/home/army you have fucked up.

This is an many other beautiful scene you done show why the assair leading the galactic community. There radically different view of time tables and centers long fought process. It not only infuriating for any non assairy but it creates a Maher disconnect from everyone else and there using there possion and economic control to fours it on everyone else leads to civilians especially for the short lived ones like sailans and vouch where multiple generations go by with no one really accomplishing mutch of any think with leads to an incredibly stagnant an complacent soeity witch just makes everyone even more dependent on the assair witch of course is exactly what the assiry want

Yaaa my Fanfiction working i can read a job keep it up .

Something being a stylistic decision on your part doesn't make it any less annoying to read.

great work but so short

I am sorry but i am out . I cannot invest anything in this story . I dont like or recognize the characters or the setting .

YES

Pls make a codex

Technocrats? I thought they view the humans as primitives? And now they're calling them that?