this fic has potential for greatness. And I know that you will do justitto this amazing idea

I want moar. This fic looks fuckin dope.

Well now... this is all kinds of interesting. Looking forward to more!

Ooh a non evil/dick Authority Figure.

this is new. I like it. More plz!

thank you for the chapter mate and honestly, humor would have ruined this chapter. Forced humor is never cool in a story and old man yamamotos circumstances aren‘t all that funny right now.

On another note, you regularly use „herself“ or „her“ when there isn‘t any female or anything feminine in the vicinity. Either it is a typo or you don‘t know when to use female tenses, I do not know so I‘m just gonna assume the later. she/her/herself etc. are only used for female/feminine characters/things.

You've got a new follower and favourite this story, lovely stuff and Old man Yama is a great choice, I love what would happen with him and Thor, should be life changing for the young blonde and hilarity ensues.

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

continue please

This is a really fun concept

Bro, I'm so hyped for this. I sincerely hope you have some sort of back log or have written up a plan. Please, I'm begging.

Not so much of a fan of you recapitulating Yamas whole death, but I understand that these lines were necessary for those who arent that familiar with his death and in general to set the tone of his character in your fic.
Apart from that really liked how you portrayed him. Thor ... well the Thunderer is an asshole atm.

Heh. To my chagrin I can totally picture these two walking out of the hospital and down the street: one, ancient, BEARDED, scarred and naked, the other a male supermodel in a hospital gown.

On the AN: Thx for the fic. And: full agreement. I mean, for all many Bleach fans regard him as some unthankful, tyrannical old cogger - hes the guy who usually is slated to try and usurp absolute power, whereas he gave it all up. He is exactly not a tyrant. And no, Oshos ink would not be able to erase the name of his flames XD Srsly the way part of the last arc and the novels worked to make him less irks me...
Either way, IMO Yama is one of the OP old men pulled off best. He isnt a pervert, imbecile nor tyrant, nor totally "zen". He actually fulfills his role as military leader and has both great strengths and weaknesses.
Cant wait to see him herd around the Avengers HA!

Yama! Yama!
Srsly, there arent enough stories about OMG - yeah hes OP (and skilled, experienced and recently humbled) but so is basically every other crossover character.

I wasnt a fan of "Krakaboom". Sure it was a nice separation of paragraphs but IMO should only be used with comics. Id have described the effect of the lightning and given if a fast pace by just describing it in one short sentence fe Lightning struck. and then describe the after the effects in detail.

Really liked it otherwise. And now for the 2nd chapter...

there is a reason the Fandom calls him OMG
Old Man Genocide

This chapter was amazing, I really liked it. Can't wait to see Yamamoto interact with the other Marvel characters.

Hopefully you update this soon :D