Reviews for A Badass' Quest Across Pandora |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I will forever state this: I will always love the idea, that Jack actually *did* love Angel. But he was fucked up thrice over, and after seeing how badly things were going for her, decided "if she's going to burn out either way, its going to *mean* something". |
![]() ![]() ![]() I came across this writing site: Storio (storioai dot com). It uses AI to help write stories way faster. I’m testing it with some of my older stories right now. |
![]() ![]() currently playing bl3 purely for the gunplay as the story is... well its shit, its utter dogshit so i play without dialogue audio. reading this now and my fucking god youre a way better writer than any of the people working on bl3, the dialogue feels so much closer and proper to the borderlands franchise. youre badass. |
![]() ![]() ![]() then, he realized he could fit his giant dick into this oreteen explosives expert. She screamed for him to stop.. and so he did. HE USED HIS MAXIMUM TIMESTOP ABILITY TO RUSH TINA TO THE SHOWER AND SCRUB EVERY PART OF HER AND THEN PROCEEDED TO LICK EVERY PART OF HER. He then canceled time stop, with him still inside her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tina is best girl. shes crazy and hot, even underage . I feel like she would strangle me and I could finally feel something during sex |
![]() ![]() ![]() did .. did he lose most of his memory? who doesnt know what an almanac is? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter hurt to read. Not because it was bad, but because it meant that the story was over. Well done, making a story worth caring about. Cant wait to see what you do next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gold for the gold pile/Loot for the loot” ? “ Can you guess |
![]() ![]() ![]() The monster was inside Jack, hell it's inside everyone, but it determined by everyone on their own if they are or are not a monster, and sadly Jack had a bad day. A very bad day. He lost his wife, the woman he loved the most, but losing her broke him and it did not help all the elements merged to the source of his pain and his goal to end these threats. Bandits/raiders attempting to kidnap his daughter. Siren powers viewed as a dangerous curse that cost the life of his wife. His overwhelming goal was to eliminate the bandits on Pandora and bring order and justice to the planet, that eye weapon was this plan, but he feared betrayal like what happened to the station in the pre-sequel as it nearly cost his life and that caused the worse elements in his to rise up. In overall, Jack became a monster from a series of bad days. Oh, he is a complete monster, but not all monsters are born, some are created by the events around them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() F**k, i can't believe this story is really over. i loved every chapter and adventures of David and his friends. Hope theres another story after. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finally finished reading this after awhile, honestly I'd actually love to see a sequel to this get made. especially now that borderlands 4 has been announced. I'd love to see how the borderlands 3 story would go with your character involved, plus maybe see a bit of the eden 5 stuff. i also kinda want closure on what happens with the relationship between gaige, tina and david. all in all i actually really enjoyed this story, would really love to see a sequel get made |
![]() ![]() ![]() honestly this was a very good read, it had its ups and downs, but now all i really want is a continuation of it even if its only a few chapters of David powering through bo3 like it was nothing , with the new bo4 now announced i can only hope it will be good , |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm liking the story so far, I just hope David doesn't become a OP character who can one-shot everyone and make the story has no real stakes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would be REALLY cool if you back up for a sequel... |
![]() ![]() ![]() bought the pandora collection a week ago and after playing the game for 60 hours i finally understnd the story better. just finished re reading this as well |