I am not really criticizing the author but the story is becoming darker or maybe I just have a special hatered towards suffering of children in particular. As I read, my heart becomes heavier.

Goddamit how do you make this story so intresting.

It's so humorous and sweet what is happening to Albedo, in a way she found religion, she regularly listens to a human preist and her live is better for that.

I am loving this fic so far, but the Albedo and Ainz drama is so weird, I totally understand Albedo's side and was understanding of Ainz until he revealed his humanity to her(which in itself was drawn out too much) but all this drama after he knows she is loyal, I understand that emotions are complex but he understands he is hurting Albedo and he loves all NPCs as his children, which parent with the rationality of Ainz will just prolong that suffering, why not have a long talk with her, communicate the feelings, we already know she is not a threat so why has not Ainz calmed down and just hold her close (just as a father figure if that's how he is comfortable) he is seeing her frantic desperation and despair and still he is worried about his feelings and how he is not comfortable, I am not saying there should be a erotic scene which will end this tension, just that he sacrifice his emotional comfort just enough to listen to her and try to help her, and him being the root cause of this dramatic love is makes him more responsible to act towards a resolution.

Good fic, but Gazef and Ramos’s being defeated is really weird, I can’t bring myself to believe they lost. This whole arc with Enri starting her own kingdom has been weird in my opinion. She’s a good leader but she really doesn’t have the chops to be a Queen. Peasant record also don’t have a high chance of success, especially if there outnumbered. And from my understanding Ainz only equipped the original rebels at Carne, so those with superior equipment would be a fraction of the now total revolt.

I absolutely love this story so far the changes are interesting and keep everything fresh. well done

Yeah finally caught up with the latest chapter. I've been losing my sleep this past week trying to read more of this story. It's been a nice ride and this definitely help satiate my hunger for Overlord content as the Light Novel is still stuck with the elf king arc.

And as much as I wanted to check your other novels now, I think I should sleep first. (Lol)

Thanks for this Author! May you live as long as you like.

Glad you spared that group.

Remedious is so stupid that I'm amazed the Queen is more of an idiot that she didn't kill her yet
So I shall skip multiple chapters filled with this stupidity

Aw man, you killed Hamskee (I think that's how you pronounce his name)

The biggest issue with this fanfic is the complete disregard of the "Limit Breaking" for Momonga himself. We are maybe alluded to his new powers like three times. The first is when he says he's level 150, then he manhandles the Elf King, whos apparently a high level player. And I guess his disregard for safety is the third reason.

This was just an "Ainz has feelings and a lot of people go through redemption arcs" fanfic, nothing to do with the limit breaking. I guess the early chapters had Foresight benefit from it, but it ended there. You should have made Ainz create 13th tier spells or something, use it against the true dragon lords. By the way where the fuck are they? They were NEVER mentioned through this whole fic. The strongest person was the Elf King or Zesshi, and they're supposedly around level 80.

The writing could have been better in a lot of places, though my favourite part was the Frost Dragon Patriarch (not writing that name out) redemption arc, easily the best portion. I thought he'd either be killed off or just stay the way he is. Making him meet Neia was weird as hell but it actually went really well. Props for that. Though I will say this, you are terrible at writing romance. The relationships come out from nowhere.

the queen of frost is way too merciful to be believed. She should have had both of them killed, but she doesnt because plot

This is an awesome story. You're an amazing writer. i hope this story isn't dead it's great!

with the amount of sex and so on that you show, dragging out this relationship is simply painful for this book...no matter how it was, in my opinion their relationship is as simple as possible, in a human body Satoru would not have withstood her pressure and the truth is that this would suit everyone, what gg is doing now is not a relationship problem, but an evasion of responsibility.

with the amount of sex and so on that you show, dragging out this relationship is simply painful for this book...no matter how it was, in my opinion their relationship is as simple as possible, in a human body Satoru would not have withstood her pressure and the truth is that this would suit everyone, what gg is doing now is not a relationship problem, but an evasion of responsibility