|Reviews for Losing Control|
| ryu015 chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
Wow... And I never played Dragon Quarter... I read somewhere that Ryu was a robot... Am I wrong? Anyway, great... um... story... ?
| Angelkitty1 chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
Yeah, my review was lost too dammit. I agree with Ryu, this was one of the best parts. I also loved the part when Odjin first spoke to him, oh and Origin! sorry...I just really love that game. Do me a big favor, you should write what it was like for Nina and Lin to see him transform. I want some fics about bof5's Nina's thoughts since she can't talk. I love it though and I know you could do it! So go! Write about it! lol. Anwways, good job!
| Ryu Gunslinger chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
Now, I know I reviewed here before, but considering the little error that occured around some time between 6/10-6/13, many of the reviews are lost, mine being one of them for this one.
Anyway, I like how you wrote this scene, as it was one of my favorites in the game, next to where Elyon confronts Ryu.
Short, but still good.
| nightdragon0 chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Short, but pretty interesting
| D.D.04 chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
That was pretty good. Are you planning to continue? Cause it was a tad on the short side. Great idea tho.