|Reviews for After All We've Done : A North and South Modern Variation|
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/23
Nice chapter. I always a fan of you stories
I can’t wait for next... be patient
- She’ll fly to England
- Her super rich aunt plans and always planning sth
- Perhaps uncle Bell have to intervene?
| Enarak chapter 13 . 3/22
Good for Margaret for calling Mrs T out on her bullshit!
| YuuriQueen chapter 13 . 3/22
'What if I lose her anyway?' for all the straightforwardness John can master, I think he lacks courage! Perhaps I'm beeing a little too harsh, I know. Perhaps I'm mistake. Arghhhhhhhh it's just that I think that he need to make a move right now! If you now your mother is drinving crazy your wife, why can't you do something about it? Why wait? He's expecting that everything resolve itself? I think he's waiting for Maggie to come to him, althought I know he make a point in going to her every night to pick her up and carry her to bed. Poor girl. She's so young! I remember when I was 19. I don't miss that time at all xD
Loved how he defend her against Hannah! I love Hannah, but I also think John's right. She can't take it out with her son's wife just because she didn't choose her for him! Can I hit her? xD
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/22
finally miss hale and Mrs T confrontation, not expecting it to be polite but this one is explosive!
| Windyandstormy chapter 13 . 3/22
Thank you. Great chapter
| mariantoinette1 chapter 13 . 3/22
It was about time John made his choice clear to his mother. Great story.
| Jeslovsu2 chapter 1 . 3/21
Nice! Great chapter! Thanks!
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/19
It's not cool to let her cry herself to sleep. Pregnant woman’s emotions and moods can lead to depression if she unable to control. Fanny is hilarious she can practically hear everything from that room. She meant it
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/18
This chapter was well worth the wait, it has such a great flow. You convey emotions so well through your writing that you feel the intensity of the characters as you read, great job!
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/18
Hannah just wanted to make it clear that she doesn’t like Maggie. She doesn’t actually ready to get to know her. She has a control issue LOL. John is an idiot too hahhahahah That would surely cause the collapse of their very young relationship
| Carolineonestop chapter 12 . 3/18
Oh dear I can see trouble ahead
John should sort out his mother calling her Miss Hale. No excuse no matter what anniversary is. No wonder Margaret wants to be out of that house. I do like this Fanny though. She talks such a lot of sense.
| Mcmjp chapter 12 . 3/18
| Enarak chapter 12 . 3/18
While I love this story, I don't like the turn that this John is taking. You are making him borderline emotionally abusive. And Mrs Thornton too.
| mariantoinette1 chapter 12 . 3/18
Their argument seems so pointless. Hopefully the baby is safe. It would crush them both if something happened to the child.
| YuuriQueen chapter 12 . 3/17
I don't want to know what will happen in the next several chapters! Ahhh damn John's pride! Wake her up, you asshole! Take her to bed, wake her up and tell her you love her! And then you can leave to work. What. An. Idiot.
I always loved Fanny. She's one of my favourites characters (well, I don't have many: John, Margaret, Fanny, Mrs Thorton, Mrs Hale. That's the list. The rest can eat grass hahaha)
I just hope she doesn't have a miscarriage. God knows how sick I'm of those stories xD