Reviews for After All We've Done : A North and South Modern Variation
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
Thanks
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1
Love the story!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/1
Very very nice and sweet. The story is so real and alive. ️Thanks again for updating this modern N&S version
Mcmjp chapter 10 . 3/1
So clever!
Momof4boys chapter 10 . 3/1
I love your story and your writing so much! Thank you so much for continuing to update! I’ve always just “lurked” but actually signed up so I can get alerts when you update. Can’t wait to see how J & M’s story evolves. Love it so much!
YuuriQueen chapter 10 . 3/1
Oh, what a beautiful story! I'm in love with it! :D
3marant0 chapter 10 . 3/1
This story is sooooooo good every chapter gets better than the last. It’s so complex and modern and true to series. Ugh. Just scrumptious!
Windyandstormy chapter 10 . 3/1
Beautiful chapter
mariantoinette1 chapter 10 . 3/1
Thanks to resourceful Fanny, newly married can enjoy first hours of their wedded bliss undisturbed. Let's hope John's doubts prove to be futile.
Guest chapter 8 . 2/28
I can’t wait to read the next chapter. I’ve been stalking your story all day. I’m terrible.
Windyandstormy chapter 9 . 2/27
This was so cute. Loved the story
faith-hope-and-glory chapter 9 . 2/25
I approve! This whirlwind marriage is very John and Margaret, I feel. You explained details and feelings enough, I didn’t feel the pacing too fast.
Now we have (already) much happier couple here than in your previous version. I wonder how you are going to make their up and downs without making them too sweet or too easy.
Anyway, congratulations, John and Margaret!
faith-hope-and-glory chapter 8 . 2/25
Thank you! I throughly enjoyed this chapter. Lots of conversation. Your dialogues are always brilliant. I love to read them. So many in here, so happy!
Mr. Hale with John. Margaret with Mrs. Thornton. Mr. Hale with Margaret. They were all good with different charms.
And I love John and Margaret’s conversation at the last. When she talks without lying. John concise and everything -unique, funny, and touching.
I am glad she said yes. Her reasoning seemed to me a bit funny (please don’t be offended), she agreed to marry so John can sleep (in a sense at least and I liked it enough). She is weak and kind where she is needed. That’s Margaret.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/24
I’m terrible. Stalking your page all day in case you updated. Lol
Guest chapter 9 . 2/23
This is really well done, my favorite chapter so far! I think having John not be in a constant state of anxiety/anger is a nice change. Sometimes it seems he’s difficult simply for the sake of being difficult which is sometimes understandable but makes him seem a bit flat and immature. It’s great to see him and Margaret have productive conversations and see how great of a team they are. They actually accomplished a lot when they started working together. Margaret was also a refreshing change this chapter as she finally stopped being so selfish and decided to be vulnerable for once. Loved the nod to the original J and M. Excited to see where this goes. Thanks for sharing!
161 | « Prev Page 1 .. 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 .. Last Next »