why the hell does afo know about the sharingan… i hate when writers make villains know about transmigrated mcs

The Story was creative and accurate seriously
I liked it

Damn what a shame

I think it's a bit strange that Ojiro was just sorta shuffled in, interrupting what Hanzo was saying just to try and insert himself into a friendship.

Everything I know about young kids, especially ones that are bullied for an abnormal physical feature, tells me that Ojiro would definitely not have approached in that fashion. Not exactly a big deal, but just a questionable way to introduce Ojiro to Itachi.

The idea of the story is nice, but it's terribly boring and tedious. I sat through all 25 chapters waiting for something interesting to happen, but nothing did

Tbh I don't see it as bashing. Your Bakugou IS worse than canon but that's fine. Honestly I would have been happy with a complete expulsion despite him being one of my favourite characters. Like damn what he said to Todoroki was the worst.

I skimmed through chapters 20-25 in 5mins because of how incredibly boring this fic has regressed to. In my opinion, you've either lost the plot, didn't have much to begin with, or just unskilled with your pacing.

Itachi's character is like watching paint dry, you've managed to make on of the coolest power in anime, the sharingan, incredibly dull and boring. Itachi's added on character has absolutely no impact whatsover so far and we're 25 chapters in. Thousands of words in and nothing to show for it.

But hey at least you put in some major effort buddy so that's a plus point.

wEeK lOng ExPluSion

Jesus fucking Christ why? Why do you authors always have to throw in other characters when the premises is: character in this fandom? it’s Itatchi in my hero academia. So why is it that you authors always always always add another antagonist from the MCs universe? This shit is getting so old to read, where in every single crossover story when the concept is one person in another universe, you authors always add in an antagonist from the universe that the MC was from.

You can't be a pervert like Happosai without being as strong as Happosai.

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Gotta admit, I was expecting Momo to get seriously hurt or something and Itachi to regain his Mangekyou and go rampaging Susanoo or full Amaterasu on them.

Chapter 5 is not coming up for me

can momo produce liquids? how did she fuel the rocket skates that she used?

that was boring