Reviews for The Crow's Atonement
Kaiimei chapter 2 . 3/23
I think it's a bit strange that Ojiro was just sorta shuffled in, interrupting what Hanzo was saying just to try and insert himself into a friendship.

Everything I know about young kids, especially ones that are bullied for an abnormal physical feature, tells me that Ojiro would definitely not have approached in that fashion. Not exactly a big deal, but just a questionable way to introduce Ojiro to Itachi.
jixuel chapter 25 . 1/12
The idea of the story is nice, but it's terribly boring and tedious. I sat through all 25 chapters waiting for something interesting to happen, but nothing did
SetMeFreeYoon chapter 21 . 1/11
Tbh I don't see it as bashing. Your Bakugou IS worse than canon but that's fine. Honestly I would have been happy with a complete expulsion despite him being one of my favourite characters. Like damn what he said to Todoroki was the worst.
jalanteros123 chapter 25 . 1/11
I skimmed through chapters 20-25 in 5mins because of how incredibly boring this fic has regressed to. In my opinion, you've either lost the plot, didn't have much to begin with, or just unskilled with your pacing.

Itachi's character is like watching paint dry, you've managed to make on of the coolest power in anime, the sharingan, incredibly dull and boring. Itachi's added on character has absolutely no impact whatsover so far and we're 25 chapters in. Thousands of words in and nothing to show for it.

But hey at least you put in some major effort buddy so that's a plus point.
jalanteros123 chapter 20 . 1/11
wEeK lOng ExPluSion
Fredward1 chapter 15 . 12/17/2023
Jesus fucking Christ why? Why do you authors always have to throw in other characters when the premises is: character in this fandom? it’s Itatchi in my hero academia. So why is it that you authors always always always add another antagonist from the MCs universe? This shit is getting so old to read, where in every single crossover story when the concept is one person in another universe, you authors always add in an antagonist from the universe that the MC was from.
Naosj chapter 25 . 12/3/2023
You can't be a pervert like Happosai without being as strong as Happosai.
CYBERHE chapter 25 . 11/15/2023
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Genesis09 chapter 14 . 11/5/2023
Gotta admit, I was expecting Momo to get seriously hurt or something and Itachi to regain his Mangekyou and go rampaging Susanoo or full Amaterasu on them.
22jward chapter 6 . 10/22/2023
Chapter 5 is not coming up for me
jovanni0427 chapter 8 . 9/23/2023
can momo produce liquids? how did she fuel the rocket skates that she used?
Shirosaki345 chapter 6 . 8/26/2023
that was boring
Demon Weeb chapter 15 . 8/17/2023
Aizawa is like the embodiment of "Work smarter not harder"
NIG GER OPPRESSOR chapter 16 . 8/16/2023
Omega shit story
NIG GER OPPRESSOR chapter 16 . 8/16/2023
Your oc has a shitty personality
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