I think it was a really good idea to show what happened to Kuja to make him evil. Another great chapter!

So close to the end now...so we are at the final battle I know it's gunna be good, I hope that nobody dies because it sounded kinda questionable for Zidane and Ipsan there for a few minutes there. Oh well I'm sure that it will be great I look forward to this chapter I'm excited to see how u are going to wrap it up. Thank you so much for continuing this story till the end, you are a great writer and I hope to read more of your stuff in the future :)

Well, Zidane definitely can't be killed, so I'm glad that didn't happen!

I was a little confused at first because I didn't realize the flashback had ended, but once I figured that out, the rest went smoothly!

Wow great chapter I like the Zidane and Vivi interaction. I also like the showing of how destruction and Zidane interact within each other. I really hope the good guy comes out on top... Hint hint ;) Can't wait to see more dagger interaction. Keep up the good work

I think that making a Terran language was an awesome idea!

Why'd Baku have to go all mean and disown Zidane? :(

Wow very well done I like how the merge happened. It's sad though that the old Zidane can never come back. I think that because of Dagger he will be able to keep destructions personality in check. But very well done cant wait for the next chapter

Awww! I'm so glad that there are so many chapters of this for me to read!

Wahhh! Poor Zidane's tail!

OMG Kuja he saved his brother awe...And poor Blank he cares too much for Zidane. I can't wait for the next chapter keep them coming :)

Yay for being on a roll...wow lots of chapters, and so much excitement... So the battle of dagger and destruction is about to begin cant wait to see where u take this :)

Wow 2 great chapters in 1 week YAY! So there will be a dagger and destruction show down that's great. And I love how Blank and Marcus help show a side of Zidane there for a second. I feel bad for Vivi he tries so hard. But great chapter I can't wait for the next one ;)

Wow nice job in bringing Tantlus in. And it's totally a Zidane trait to have him care about the dragon. Can't wait to see where you take this whole battle scene and how it will effect Destruction. I can't wait either when you have Dagger and Destruction perhaps face off. The story is going great!

Yay we are finally at battle mode. Happy u posted early, looking forward to the next chapter. Hope u have fun on ur vacation