oh my God I love this story.
your writing is amazing.

Oh god that ending! Craig is such a cute character

I loved this story! I was completely enthralled from beginning to and you did a wonderful job with the suspense! I could not put it down and I read this obsessively. Wonderful charaterizations and set ups for each chapter. I thought it was an interesting angle to cut out almost all the HP characters and really focus on her, Antonine and Craig. I had a feeling that this would be the ending. I felt there was sudden shift in tone somewhere in the middle of when she was in the mannor when she got bored. It was that drastic but may have been a stopping point in your writing. I look forward to reading more of your work and thoroughly ebjed the ride. Keep up the great work!

I am SLAIN I’ve been having a heartattack for the entire second half of this story and omg what a thriller my stomach is literally in knots Stephen king could NEVER well done. Now I must go seeek out something disgustingly fluffy because my whole body is tense and I have no idea how to move on well done you

Holy hell, I wasn’t expecting this.

I knew it

I’m guessing his ‘inside’ help is auror Savage

Nooooooooooooooooooooo I hope Hermione will do something, she cant let him kills Craing,

My god, I hope Harry and Craing will do everything for her honor, Antonin looks more addict I love it

My god what a horrible person, I love how Dolohov seems more wrry about Hermione like he became more intense with her, like a mad love

Im happy she say to him to truth, even if He's reaction can be horrible, they need to be honest with each other

Daaaaaaaaaaamn, omg so much informations, Dlohov competely disapears but I think he will come back, Savage is just so sweet and i feel sorry for him

Poor Hermione she became so paranoid

OMG, poor Hermione; I wonder who is the auror who did that

OMG, no its impossible, I have a crazy idea of whats happening but I REFUSE to believe it, it hurts