Reviews for Disquietude
keishasalder chapter 40 . 1/2/2022
Well done!
kemme1220 chapter 40 . 12/22/2021
I enjoyed your story. It was very intense and such a thriller. When you thought it could be over another twist. You are a wonderful writer! I look forward to your next work!
SarahFraser chapter 40 . 12/14/2021
Holy shit. That was fantastic. I was going to be really disappointed if there was a HEA, but no. You DELIVERED. Gah, my heart just broke.
Sunshinemeadows chapter 7 . 12/7/2021
Ahhh I am loving this!
Guest chapter 40 . 12/4/2021
I expected it but I didn’t. But wow.
MissMrdel chapter 40 . 12/1/2021
oh my stars. another sad ending to antomine. i love the problematic pairing that is HG/AD. but "Disquietude" and "Echoes of Silence" are two amazing antomine fics so i can't complain. Thank you for writing this pieces of art Canimal.
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Hermione.Ramen chapter 40 . 11/29/2021
Sad ending but it definitely made sense. Great story! Thanks for finishing it and relieving us all of the suspense, it was killing me!
Gigipink chapter 40 . 11/28/2021
ARE YOU SERIOUS?!
Gigipink chapter 38 . 11/28/2021
Bet money that he's tracking the cat
kemme1220 chapter 40 . 11/28/2021
You are a very good thriller writer. This story had me in suspense the whole time. It was an unsuspecting ending that's for sure. Thank you for being you! Have a spectacular day!
Guest chapter 40 . 11/27/2021
Can’t stop crying
ghanima77 chapter 40 . 11/26/2021
Omg! My heart hurts! I cried for the entire chapter. I hate that Hermione didn't get the happiness she was finally allowing to accept. A part of me, is glad though that she finally found peace in her last moments. Although I'm angry that it was Harry's words that echoed in her ears in the end.

I know Hermione had made a lot if mistakes in her life and had chosen not to deal with her own past trauma. After such a horrible, mind fuck of an experience as being held captive by Antonin though, she was tentatively trying to put her life back together. Craig only offered her loving & genuine, patient support. Harry on the other hand, often resorted to victim shaming & discouraged her from finding happiness in the only real support she had. How did that play into fatalistic actions? How much love, happiness & peace did she and Craig miss out in due to Harry's interference?

I can't imagine coming out of such an experience. Having to remake your life and make a genuine attempt to improve your life, just to have your former best friend, whom you sacrificed so much for, even your family, just to have him tell you that you still aren't good enough. To have him tell you that you still aren't worthy of happiness.

How far would Craig and Hermione's relationship have grown without that interference? Would they have been expecting to increase their little family as they both so clearly wanted? Would that have given her reason to live even if she thought Craig dead? So much of her actions were tied up in her feelings if self worth.

Not it's Craig that has to figure out how to move forward. How to live through this next trauma in his life. He too lost his immediate family to the war. He too finally found someone who understood his past and didn't fault him for it. Would he learn that Hermione had been pregnant when she died? Either way, he did lose that child they so wanted with her death. I hope he learns of Harry's interference. If only to give him someone to focus his anger on besides himself. Harry was shit friend anyway. Had he "protected" his "friend" in a similar way previously? I do hope he can move on. That he can forgive Hermione for leaving him. She didn't break her promise. She didn't go after Antonin without him, not really. She thought him already gone and was content to join him after Antonin was dealt with. Hopefully his remaining family will help him through this devastating tragedy & he doesn't join Hermione too soon.

God this was a great story. Despite the how desperately I wanted a happy ending, it really would have been inauthentic to the storyline. I seriously can't stop crying. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Guest chapter 40 . 11/26/2021
Really loved this story! Your suspenseful writing always kept me second guessing and characterizations were *chef’s kiss*. Keep up the amazing work.
burn-after-reading-please chapter 40 . 11/26/2021
Intense ending, but good one!
Claire chapter 40 . 11/25/2021
Nooooooooo! This can’t be the ending :’( Hermione was a little sucky but deserved better! And poor Craig. Ugh it was so good and unexpected, you really got me with the end of the second to last chapter.
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