|Reviews for Somebody Else|
| dandelionerose chapter 3 . 7/6/2012
beautiful, just beautiful...
no more words...
| Burgundychic chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Oh yeah,I forgot to commend you for using a different style of writing here. It's actually creative of you to think of shifting from a person's point of view to another's point of view. Good one! )
| Burgundychic chapter 3 . 12/2/2005
Much like the real ending of the story... But then who cares? At least you ended it on a happy note, didn't you? )
| Burgundychic chapter 2 . 12/2/2005
I have to admit that I found this one much better as compared to Syaoran's point of view since this one showcases Sakura's optimism vis-a-vis Syaoran's love for her. I think that the piece is just long enough to keep the readers anticipating for the next installment of this story. I do hope that you end this on a happy note. )
| Burgundychic chapter 1 . 12/2/2005
Hm... Syaoran is pessimistic here. It makes me sad how cynical he seemed to be about getting together with Sakura. So you made Eriol and Sakura fall for each other here, didn't you? Umm.. I don't like the idea of Eriol and Sakura together since I want Tomoyo to be partnered with him instead. Sakura is for Syaoran as Tomoyo is for Eriol- this is on my own perception.
Maybe it will be better to lessen Syaoran's pessimism for the readers to anticipate the continuation of this one more.
| 1Natsuyo1 chapter 3 . 11/24/2004
Guessy Guessy! I came back and read it again! It didn't take long only about 15 minutes, BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD!
The only chapter I didn't really like was chapter 2 because it was way too similar to the show. (I meant when he left, the yukito spilling is all goodstuff)
Best chappys, 1 and 3. Hee hee. GOOD LUCK ON FUTURE STORIES!
| 1Natsuyo1 chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
Anyways...Zis is one of ze best ztoriez in ze world.
I'M SO GLAD YOU WROTE THIS! HEE HEE! I told it to one of me friends too! ITAI! I just hit myself!...ok well anyways! I Will go!
Gazuntite (random meaning)
| L0cked x Insidee chapter 3 . 9/14/2004
Heyy! Thanks for the advice. It really helped , now the only problem is, what should I do next. I have major writer's block. haha yea 100% pinay right here! lol I'm also a fellow video gamer! lol IM me or e-mail me and maybe we can chat! I would like that! byee byee!
| Allison Landon chapter 3 . 7/30/2004
You really caught the characters' emotions well! :) Your story is really nice and I'm glad you went and reead mine too. You should write more. _
| IkuiTenshi chapter 3 . 7/22/2003
That was so touching. I'm not joking! I hope you continue to write fic like this. The POV changes were actually quite a nice attachment to the story. Keep the good work up.
| Renell chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
| moezy-chan chapter 3 . 6/28/2003
Great story! I really liked it!
| summer lover chapter 3 . 6/23/2003
You sure made me cry!I'm so happy you made a happy ending!It's was really really good!It felt, so, real!It's odd to say that, but it's true!You're really good to make Syaoran and Sakura point of view!But i think that maybe if you were changing the "normal P.O.V" and transfer it in a caracter P.O.V, it would felt even more real,but it was really great!It have been so long
since the last fanfic that made me cry!You sure hitted a weak spot!lol, well i gotta go!
| kristine chapter 3 . 6/22/2003
hei! bow ako sayo cuz!
really nice work !
| THE FISH chapter 2 . 6/19/2003
I am me.
The one who is unnamed will know who I am.
But for those that are not...
I remain a mystery.
I claim myself to be his good friend, so I
give this review for the said person.
I have read many. Yours is completely different.
It didn't take place in a concrete environment.
For you chose as the "setting" of your story, the
very essence of all stories. It is its origin. Its
power. Its very life source...
What is it?
The human emotion.
One might object and say, "Knowledge is the true
Knowledge is but a "utility". It lets you express
your feelings in ways people will understand.
But the real source..
Are those feelings.
You expressed CCS in a way rarely shown by fanfic editors, manga and even the series itself.. You told your readers what goes on in their minds and not what goes on OUTSIDE their minds...
For this piece.
I salute you!