This story is one of the best game of thrones stories, I have ever read please continue writing it.

I do hope this is continued.

fucking awesome update again soon

"Denser than Snow Vibranium by a quarter, the metal was able to stay rigid even when it was two micrometers thin while retaining the properties of snow vibranium perfectly. At one micrometer it started to act a bit strange."

So...this MC who has been working in a forge for roughly 4 or so years, is capable of making a super duper metal that's thinner than spider silk? Micrometers are measurements of IR radiation and bacterium lengths.

Now, I /could/ give you the benefit of the doubt and say you probably meant "micrometers," but I honestly wouldn't know if that was the case considering how you have him creating a brand-new metal from fiction in the same year he starts using a forge, with no prior background/knowledge and having to be top of his year at school simultaneously.

It would be interesting if something forced them to go back to valyria even the outskirts. Hope you have more material.

is it dead?

I disagree bobel it was the images from the crown were confusing. The random portal thing could be elaborate on.

This Story Turned out to be TOTALY AWESOME ...
AND then you made a total clusterfuck out of it with just Teleporting everyone over for NO reason becase yes Harry brings Teddy and andy into the Depths of gringgots to poke a Blue Portal thing .. SURE
it got so awesome with everything cant believe this wil turn any good now..
Shame

Damn actually had me feeling a little bad for Rhaegar at the end.

Have to take back the earlier reviews somewhat. Still not a huge fan of the new characters but you've made them fit in somewhat. Also love that you didn't go the route of all the Targaryen dick riders who act like the family is the second coming of Jesus and are absolutely resolved of any wrong doing, especially Rhaegar.

Again nice work but I just feel the OCs and Harry especially just throws the work in a direction I'm not sure I'll like. Appreciate the scenes with just Benjamin though.

Decent work but definitely gonna go downhill with the addition of these random OCs. The three you had originally were perfect.

I stopped when he asked to call the banners for the Maesters like WTF, conspiracies have always existed since the dawn of time and this demonstrates his lack of intelligence , the north alone cannot fight the Maesters , instead of looking for valid solutions for the north and leaving the south in its shit, the gentleman immerses himself in this shit even though he is new to planetos , they get married too soon when he should have just been engaged, just to have an excuse to push others away . A little magic could ensure that the marriage with Tully is canceled without problem with Hoster preferring Baratheon to poor Stark, Ned will return quietly to the North and will not return further south, a little magic so that Aerys is not interested in the North for a few years and leaves the South in their shit while the North But unfortunately it's more focused on politics and the desire to start a war without thinking about the consequences

You can immediately tell this is a bust just from the ridiculous wand the author gave the protagonist. What a joke, dude.

And this is where i drop this story. Adding all his family and friends and crap ruined it all for me. Its just plain stupid.