Reviews for The Shadow of Death
Eaken chapter 20 . 5/24
nahhh, im done, i hate this
Eaken chapter 18 . 5/24
aaah I dont where this is going, if fleur has any semblance of control over harry im leaving
KenyanHammer chapter 3 . 12/19/2022
Lily Potter neé Dudley? Ur HP knowledge is dwindling.
KenyanHammer chapter 3 . 10/25/2022
Lily Potter neé Dudley?
Guest chapter 25 . 10/11/2022
Please update if possible:)
Big.Daddy.Dudders chapter 3 . 10/3/2022
You make the ANs too long. It boosts bloats the word count
Otodus ssr chapter 25 . 9/27/2022
Excellent please update
orthankg1 chapter 25 . 9/12/2022
Very nice
KingKiller6 chapter 3 . 9/8/2022
I'm quite surprised that you have 2 betas and neither of them caught the Dursley name error. Their last name is Dursley not Dudley
beatshield chapter 25 . 9/2/2022
Great chapter mate
A10riddick chapter 25 . 9/1/2022
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

That wasn't an ominous ending at all!
potterbungamjibber chapter 2 . 8/9/2022
this doesn't really make sense, why would he be SOLD, it seems strange
orthankg1 chapter 24 . 8/2/2022
Very nice
A10riddick chapter 24 . 8/1/2022
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Loved this chapter!
A10riddick chapter 23 . 7/30/2022
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Looks like the are making small progress!
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