Reviews for The Shadow of Death |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nahhh, im done, i hate this |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaah I dont where this is going, if fleur has any semblance of control over harry im leaving |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lily Potter neé Dudley? Ur HP knowledge is dwindling. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lily Potter neé Dudley? |
![]() ![]() Please update if possible:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You make the ANs too long. It boosts bloats the word count |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm quite surprised that you have 2 betas and neither of them caught the Dursley name error. Their last name is Dursley not Dudley |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter mate |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! That wasn't an ominous ending at all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this doesn't really make sense, why would he be SOLD, it seems strange |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Loved this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Looks like the are making small progress! |