I was excited to read an assassin based Harry. And the first chapter made them seem so powerful, with harry going against dumbledore and beating him(I was wary of dumbledore limiting what harry could do in combat). Yet twice now he has almost died. The 2nd time to a horcrux of all things. And of course instead of being a bad ass assassin, he is stuck under rules from dumbeldore and slowly being turned into a normal teenager, though more powerful.

Why is he even at school? You hire him to stop the war and then stick him school 10 months out of the year. Story makes no sense. Instead of letting him loose on death eaters. Just to assuage dumbledore's guilt at his failure on protecting him and his parents.

From first chapter and description, thought we were going to get a harry/fleur out of school, going around battling death eaters, creatures etc. Instead both are in school(fleur should be out and harry not there at all), with angst and teenage romance drama.

What a waste of a premise.

Alright that ending definitely deserves an explanation.
Great work, keen for the next one.

This story is an excellent read so far. It is quite unique and is an extremely entertaining read. Much better then anything ive read in months. I look forward to more!

noooo, don’t shout out Thanos for his work

Honestly the premise for this story was super cool. But it was utterly ruined by several things. First is that the MC is extremely unlikeable. I found myself rooting for his enemies at every turn. Second is that MC is nuttier than a fruitcake which makes it utterly impossible to feel sympathy for him. Third is that MC was raised as a tool. So despite being “super powerful” that power means nothing because he doesn’t wield it for himself or loved ones. All in all it was truly disappointing because the premise is very cool. I thought I’d be reading something like a more fleshed out “Harry potter and the Sun Source” and what I got was an arrogant, mentally deranged tool. I guess I can only blame myself for having those expectations.

Well isn't that a surprising twist, once again the rug gets jerked out from under Harry's feet and I positively loathe the continued presence of the hallucinations.

Minus the end, this was a good chapter.

Sirius is nothing but a liability in this story, you have done the character a great disservice writing him the way you have and I still hate the hallucinations.

Albus is really slowing progress and I am still sick of the hallucinations.

If Fleur has an Adam's apple, Harry has bigger problems than dark lords.

Yep, the hallucinations are getting old.

I wish you would give these hallucinations a rest.

This story is just depressing, the characters are for the most part unlikeable and the M.C is detestable. I understand you are going for the trials and tribulations model for this story but it just makes for a frustrating read when the reader dislikes the main character as much as the main antagonist.

Ugh, why is Harry acting like he's nuttier than squirrel shit? Way to go, Daphne, I am so glad to see her turn the tables. Harry deserves every bad thing that comes his way and I can't find it in me to be upset about somebody outmanoeuvring him.

Sorry, but this whole battle scene was ridiculous. Harry fought like a bitch with fourth-year spells and Neville paid the price.