Reviews for The Shadow of Death
d.kinney07 chapter 1 . 5/2
like the story. everythung seems to flow well except for the fact that he is still a horcrux, super power old group been around forever and does nothing about it
Lord Pegel chapter 5 . 4/21
This is very interesting! Great writing and I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. You've made an already exciting world more intriguing with the excellent world building and the psychological aspect of Harry's evolution is well done!
Ezylryb chapter 5 . 4/21
Great chapter
Ezylryb chapter 4 . 4/21
Great chapter
Ezylryb chapter 3 . 4/21
Great chapter
Ezylryb chapter 2 . 4/21
Great chapter
Ezylryb chapter 1 . 4/21
Great chapter
Ken106348 chapter 2 . 4/4
this could be a good story but I've just lost interest
AxeTheGreat chapter 5 . 3/15
Nice story!
DebaterMax chapter 5 . 3/14
I feel like I missed something. When did HP die in siberia
stylo1 chapter 4 . 3/13
so for all their great knowledge they did not recognize the horcrux in harry. figures
stylo1 chapter 3 . 3/13
this is more about the rehabilitation and acclimatization of an identity dead assassin, ofc while he is fighting a war and surrounded by stupid childeren without any help from a professional. its little more then empty bluster so far.

harry needs to marry fleur, only after he finishes hogwarts. so just dont finish hogwarts. ofc all of this is meaningless like so many other stories, it is not like andromeda black ran away to marry a muggleborn so that option is out
stylo1 chapter 3 . 3/13
is he really giving up what i assume is his wandless magic in his left hand for a wand that is only tied to him by prophecy and will remain outside of him? why doesnt dumbledore just give harry the elder wand? what is it with all these games? there is no use to it and as you are not bashing dumbledore im lost as to this purpose
stylo1 chapter 2 . 3/13
'sometimes the best place to hide a weapon is in plain sight.' yes but why hide something they dont even know exsist and can strike from the shadows, unless harry is a lure to attract voldemort to hogwarts it makes little sense, worse is that harry rationalises it as making sense. i'd advice reading harry potter and the sun source.

harry is forced to attent hogwarts wasting his time and now on top of that he has to pay for it with his own funds?

why bother creating an OP harry if you're gonna have him go undercover following the canon timeline. that creates only frustration and stupidity
stylo1 chapter 2 . 3/13
this internal debate of harry is very odd. all he was trained to be is a slave assassin yet he has so many thoughts that would directly go against that. anger for his first master for selling him, disdain for the second for being weak. these thoughts would prevent absolute loyalty and obedience.

your writing is quite good but you overdo things trying to make them 'grander then life'
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