Didnt they have another daughter after corridan that woth name as combination of lily and whatever name you gave to daphne mother from first life?

Hey, I noticed that you have added many Halo elements to the story, and I was wondering if you were planning on creating a Spartan II version for the Mandalorians, or if you would be open to using a character like attic to act as a new rival against Haron, sort of like at the beginning of Halo Infinite?

Pity that Paul, instead of planning some revenge, is just an asshole :(
On other topics, there is one question bothering me - did Padme have any contact with her family on Naboo?

Can't remember if I had posted a review or not, and was just checking to see if there was an update. It was another great chapter Sage, and I must commend you on your writing of both stories, as they are probably the best I have seen recently. Paul needs to pull his head out of his ass, and quite frankly this is what I hated about him in this story and the actual one, which was he was a conceded whiner. All about himself and never about anyone else including his children. He decided to have a three-way relationship with two women without asking about them first, and then abandoning his family when things got tough. Chaney should come back and kick his ass from the dead.

Anyways look forward to seeing what you have in mind for Ordo's discovery and how the alliance between the Rebellion and the Mandalorians works out. If Mon Motha and Harry meet should be interesting, and hopefully Padme is there to refree. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work, thanks!

I so love your stories, thank you for sharing them!

Dude!, you brought the Dune universe into Star Wars. U R My Hero!

most of this chapter is a repeat from the last chapter only the first few were new

The writing of the story quickly improved after the first few chapters. Thanks for writing it.

Is there a reason Kuat Yards have not been hit by stealth missiles?

lol that fight scene with vader was from the Obi-wan tv series. Okay I think most species with the force can stay alive for centuries wasn't there a human who was able to live for around 500 years and also technology is so far advance that living for a century is possible for most species

I think you're getting a bit too crossover-crazy. The SW galaxy is already absurd enough without all the extra stuff.

Another winner of a chapter...

Here's another idea I had...

A vader gets an Extremis and Centipede upgrade(their expendable anyway, right? So Sideous would see giving them a kamikaze option to be perefect extension of 'it')

But also, during one of the vader's fights, he dose NOT get killed but rather his ship crash lands on a distant world...the world of the cult of the Heinsnake.

He get's put back together and augmented by Dr Challus Mercer(Deadspace), one of the cultists most ruthless and most capable fanatics...

Vader's power has now grown greatly thanks to the upgrades, his appearance is now more like Zeltrax(Dino Thunder), and unlike Cannon Vader he accepts his position as head of the cult and agrees to help take down Sideous and Anakin...

What do you think?

p.s. I'm still waiting for your response to my other ideas...

As always epic chapter. Thank you for all the hard writing I appreciate you. Keep up the great writing.

Anger... arrogance... selfishness... entitlement... can you say Lady Vader? Somebody needs a SERIOUS attitude adjustment..

Well this was a action packed chapter I like how you had Obi-wan defeat Vader it shows he isn't invincible and can be defeated by weaker force user you just have to be smarter Such as obi-wan switching up his form and throwing Vader of balance and then targeting the system that controls the stimulants.

You know something tells me that people are going to start looking to Padme for leadership in the rebel alliance since garm and mon cant agree on any thing.

Finally this confirms that while Leia inherited padmes looks she got her personality from Anakin including his recklessness.