Reviews for The Legacy of House Ordo
Te Ne'tra Mand'alor chapter 43 . 10/8
Not sure if you’re aware but Mandalorians have their own marriage vows.

“Mhi solus tome, mhi solus dar'tome, mhi me'dinui an, mhi ba'juri verde” which translates "We are one when together, we are one when parted, we will share all, we will raise warriors."

The process is quite simple. One party says the vow, and then the recipient repeats it.

You can literally do it over the phone or text if the circumstances require it. Like if you’re on a separate ends of a battlefield or the Galaxy.
cameron1812 chapter 47 . 10/7
What an epic ride, thank you! Been here aince the beginning and glad for it! The Epilogue is so all-encompasing its basically another bookThank you!
Dretnuh chapter 1 . 9/30
Great story! Just wish it was longer. Both in detail in the timeline it went through, and into what the epilogue just glosses over casually. Like that epilogue could be a whole other story in itself!
Dretnuh chapter 1 . 9/30
Great story! Just wish it was longer. Both in detail in the timeline it went through, and into what the epilogue just glosses over casually. Like that epilogue could be a whole other story in itself!
Dretnuh chapter 47 . 9/30
Damnit! You gave Obi-Wan and his family like a sentence in the epilogue! Bruh I wanna know how Obi-Wan is doing! Granted, I haven’t gotten all the way through yet but you just brushed over that so quick! Also Obi-Wan should totally be on rhe council. He is by far one of the most experienced and wise of the jedi left. And he would definitely challenge Anakin like how he was saying smh.
Dretnuh chapter 47 . 9/30
Damnit! You gave Obi-Wan and his family like a sentence in the epilogue! Bruh I wanna know how Obi-Wan is doing! Granted, I haven’t gotten all the way through yet but you just brushed over that so quick! Also Obi-Wan should totally be on rhe council. He is by far one of the most experienced and wise of the jedi left. And he would definitely challenge Anakin like how he was saying smh.
Dretnuh chapter 46 . 9/30
Holy shit is one of the good guys finally actually gonna die in this “War”. And only in the final battle lmao. Don’t get me wrong, I love this story, but to have a war and NONE of the main good guys die…. Just makes there be no stakes whatsoever. And this is coming from a guy who usually loves mary sue type stories as pure escapism lol.
Dretnuh chapter 46 . 9/30
Holy shit is one of the good guys finally actually gonna die in this “War”. And only in the final battle lmao. Don’t get me wrong, I love this story, but to have a war and NONE of the main good guys die…. Just makes there be no stakes whatsoever. And this is coming from a guy who usually loves mary sue type stories as pure escapism lol.
Talonwalker chapter 47 . 9/21
Great story, very enjoyable the whole way through!
Thanks!
Fabianadat chapter 47 . 9/20
Ufa, terminei! Só posso resumir com uma palavra: incrível. Apesar de não conhecer uns 70% de suas referências de povos, armas, mundos, guerras, naves,.,. Curti muito a história em si. Fiquei impressionada com o nível de detalhes e só imaginar o tanto de pesquisa que deve ter feito. Parabéns!
Dretnuh chapter 43 . 9/18
Yeah, what’d you expect. Halfthe important people in the galaxy who are against the empire are at this wedding lmao.
LydiaCrazzy chapter 47 . 9/17
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Dretnuh chapter 43 . 9/17
Honestly the fact that you have basically managed to squeeze like any Star Wars show or movie anywhere in the vicinity on the timeline in some way into this story. While including the disney shows, AND like a shit ton of stuff from legends/EU, while also adding a bunch of stuff from other franchise and MOST of that fitting pretty seemlessly. Honestly blows my mind how much research must have gone into making this. Especially for your spaceship builder simulator, which while at times is kind of annoying, is also mind bogling how many different ships you have made in this (like 90% of which I have only a very very very vague idea of what they look like because I’m not googling everytime a new ship comes up lmao). But still bravo with how in depth it is. I only wish it was longer now that I’m close to the ends…
Dretnuh chapter 42 . 9/17
“Did not take it as a challenge, instead as a means of proving himself.” Is that not like basically the definition of a challenge….?¿?
Dretnuh chapter 41 . 9/17
Kind of stupid to me that this whole time you built up Mon Mothma as like as someone who staunchly believes in her values, aka like peace and kind of pacifism. Yet as soon as she doesn’t get her way she resorts to violence….. so much for the only thing you said she cared about and literally the only personality trait she’s been showing. Abandons it as soon as people aren’t listening to her…
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