I know this is old but I just don’t understand any of your story. I get him telling supergirl who and what he was because she is also a super hero but he acts so dumb for no reason and please explain to me how the hell he has “whiskers” when he nor Kushina had Kurama? Fyi that’s the only reason he would have them it’s fucking canon ️

I love the story looking forward to whenever he goes back hope he visits other places to

Your fighting and power levels are very uneven

I get that you want to make it interesting... But you can't just go around fighting Darkseid competitively(sure with allies... But that's Darkseid) in 1 chap then getting completely blindsided by a "measly" Whitewalker.

Did he underestimate them ... More than likely... But still... I felt it was very rushed just to close this chapter...

IMO ... your 100 and Boys world is written good ... GOT is also quite good... But I think you made it forced in the end

noir is just black in french dude not black film alyhpugh noir is a film genre

what's earth-985?

Okay good stuff. Liked the conversation Naruto had with Sam and Dorothy about home. Good that the Winchester brothers will continue to be a part of this multiverse. Glad Naruto left behind gifts to make hunts easier as well as keep in contact with one another. Oh and screw Chuck! He is a power hungry little bastard!

...That forging scene was possibly the dumbest thing I have ever read. It seems like you really wanted a forging scene and read up on a couple of wikipedia articles about it which I can sorta respect...but you got so much so, so, so wrong.
Both Vibranium and Valyrian steel are super metals, so why you didn't just alloy them is a complete mystery; speaking of which, why in the hell would you fold the metal so much to get 3 million goddamn layers?! The folding of the metal was to remove *some* impurities because guess what, pure metal is *brittle*. Not a problem with two magical super metals, yes, but typical katana were folded four or five times, max. Anything else is completely and totally unnecessary, as was the entire scene. I get it, katanas are cool and you wanted a cool forging scene but by god, anyone with the slightest understanding of forging works cringed so hard their spines exploded out of their backs.
Not to mention that two magical super metals made into a katana with a *blunt* edge would be wildly lethal when wielded by someone even mildly athletic or even someone with a decent arm; wielded by a *speedster*?
Blunt weapons work by diffusing kinetic energy through a target by a wide surface area, which is why getting hit with a bat might break a bone but not cut the limb off. Kinetic energy focused through a thin, small surface area *penetrates*. That's how *bullets work.*
In essence, I somewhat enjoy your stories. This? This made my brain hurt.
You, Sir...Have Posted Cringe.

Hey, after reading this latest chapter I realized that since the original Naruto exists here then the Otsutsuki Clan does too. Therefore, they could invade this Naruto's or other dimensions!

ALMOST TO EARTH 1 AHHHHHHHHHH

It will really be an interesting fiction

This fic is good but I have a suggestion can u do a fic of your oc with him finding Thor weapon of Loki artifact or Odin spear

Awesome chapter, loved it!

please upload more chapters of Maelstrom in Westeros

Was expecting something with a little more boom shaka laka but this chapter wasn't bad, can't wait to see more adventures and excited to see them fight zoom again

This was a great chapter.

So is Naruto going to have 2 enemies being Zoom and Godspeed right?

Anyway, can't wait when The Crimson Speedster is back.

Anyway, keep up the great work Choe and have a good day.