Reviews for For The Love of Bones |
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![]() ![]() Giving up black lordship is so fking stupid and makes no sense. Worthless story now |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fun, warm story. Looking forward to seeing what you've got planned next for these two. Only thing I would suggest is that Harry seems a little mature a little quickly. It's fine, but I have a little bit of a hard time seeing canon post-OoTP Harry acting like that so quickly. Again, just a minor thing, and I did enjoy this feel-good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, interesting idea. The writing is good. I just dont like that sirius somehow stays around in harry's head. It would have been nice to see another character take on that mentor/confidant role if it is needed. To me, the idea of harry/amelia having to somehow work things out, and how that dynamic forms and evolves is the interesting bit and (for me) having someone in harrys headspace takes away a lot of the appeal. How present is he in this? Is this a Sirius is around and commenting all the time thing, or he only speaks at critical moments, or what? I might can deal with the latter, but not the former. Anywho, like I said above, youre certainly skilled at writing and I wish you the best if I end up not following up with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry's great-great-great grandfather named the elves after a muggle movie? thats 4 generations, what movies wpuld have even been made |
![]() ![]() ![]() ameil knows harry can cast a patronus due to the rrail |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow merci pour l'histoire |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Fooled me with the Bones contract. Amelia is a great choice. Keep up the great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible story, thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always think it’s funny the phrase “reverse the roles”. You have a 15-year-old boy and like a 30 some odd woman in this story. Reverse the roles. 15-year-old girl and a 30 some odd man. How does this story now sound? Ignoring the magic and all of that circumstance, could you honestly picture yourself writing a story about a 15-year-old girl and a 30 year-old man? Think before you write. There’s this crazy thing called aging up characters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not usually the biggest fan of the "Happy Harry" fics but this really has nice characters and characterizations as well as an interesting plot. The age difference does seem a little contrived at the beginning particularly given the age of consent in Britain is 16 but I think you did manage to keep them from violating that particular law even if you weren't overt about it. Overall a nice job on this story. I am curious to see what you do with the follow-up. Thanks for your hard work on this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story. Never seen this match before, but I am old enough to know it isn't a problem. Could be a powerful match. Head of DMLE and Chosen One. Lots of help for both of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have skipped to the last chapter and we have Draco apparently redeemed and Harry handing over the asset that apparently is insanely valuable to him, and he gets a 'thank you'. Very cool. |