Reviews for Fate-In Time: Chaldea Alternative Records |
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![]() ![]() ![]() muu... when is the next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() update the next chapter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, thank you for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SPANK THOSE CHILDREN LET'S GO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Chapter and finally i have to say |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter looking forward to the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG today I woke up and went in and saw a new chapter of this and I was excited, honestly after reading your stories and others it inspired me to write, I hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fate in time was honestly your best work even though you kinda ruined it in the end. And you stories after it really fall short so honestly, I hope you go back to this gem and try to remember how you did it and go with it as a reference. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thus does the Hero's Journey trope rear it head once more, and Arturia is not reacting fast enough to stop it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, Lancer Arturia has it hard, her children are reaching the age of wanting to go out and have an adventure, which can be dangerous, due to the deteriorating state of the country, due to the confrontation between Morgan the Fair (XD) vs King Vortigen For one thing, after saving her children (or saving, the slavers, from them), aside from scolding them, Lancer might be forced to reveal the deal s made with Morgan, which they may not know about (especially Shirou, who he feels that something is bothering her - Merlin's visit), because if she is convinced, Lancer Arturia could try to do something, but there is still to take into account the Geass she did with Morgan, which prevents Lancer from acting against her sister Also, uff, Merlin insists that she take the role that fate had for Arturia, even though said fate would have forced the wizard to be locked up for eternity in a tower in Avalon, as punishment. Or maybe they could help little by little, taking people and refugees to a hidden sanctuary in a Bounded Field, similar to the one in her house, with the whole family participating, after she accepts that she can't keep them safe forever in her house, but if she and Shirou can be accompanying them or prepare them well Good luck and keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() love you no homo |
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![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see what happens with the kids. Awesome chapter. |