Reviews for Fate-In Time: Chaldea Alternative Records
Dasgun chapter 25 . 5/1
Guest chapter 25 . 5/1
Good . AltLancer kill'd da hou!
Chuckleswhy chapter 25 . 5/1
Deserved honestly, good job Artoria.
TheMist33 chapter 25 . 5/1
Excellent chapter, while I feel for Morgan, truly, this was the consequences of her own actions; though for Arturia this was possibly the worst outcome she could have chosen in the long run. Both sides emotions, feelings, and decisions feel justified, but at the same time it feels like to the bitter end they were unable to see eye to eye and truly understand each other. The crux of the relationship between Morgan and Arturia. Great chapter, can’t wait for the next.
Omni Fate lover chapter 1 . 4/30
Do you do Reaction Fic? Because if there is, I pray there will be a Reaction Fic about Bleach reacting to Vasto of White or Danmachi reacting to Grand Dungeon
Jack chapter 25 . 4/30
Good, whatever remorse or repentance Morgan may have shown was worthless in the end, it won't bring back anything for Arturia but this, her dying at her hands, is nothing short of justice, however empty it may have been.
Morgan, Proper Human History one at least, does not and never will deserve a happy ending.
The only tragic thing is the pretty much inevitable clash that will come between Shirou, who has no memories and needs to be a King protecting his people and family in Mordred, and Arturia, who likely even with Morgan's death will not stop trying to raze everything that was Morgan's (i.e Camelot and especially Mordred) to the ground. Heck maybe Black Knight Arturia won't even recognize, or at least acknowledge him as real, Shirou since she's so deep in her hate (and Britain's curse) she may just think it's a ploy from Morgan and try to destroy him too. Either way, this Arturia, who's deep in her hate and vengance is unlikely to be able to handle or accept Mordred even existing, it'll be like a final laugh from Morgan and proof that she took everything from her and with how unstable she is then it's clear she will react violently, like Rhongomyniad Alter violently, which of course, Shirou can't allow, thus leading to their clash.
But knowing the Fate In Time track record and Shirou's near obsession with Saber/Arturia then i hope that somewhere in the horizon lies a happy ending, even if it will be hard to reach that's never stopped Shirou before.
GrandSaberEMIYA chapter 25 . 4/30
This is probably the shortest chapter I’ve ever read that has made me feel the most emotions
Reaper Gamer chapter 25 . 4/30
Aww this really is the sad timeline isn’t it
Guest chapter 25 . 4/30
All the angst and tragedy is ruining any enjoyment I could get from this story. It's slowly becoming your worst story and it could have been so much better.
Bucio chapter 25 . 4/30
Well Artoria Lancer Alter kept her promise and killed Morgan, who did not put up any resistance (her own conscience for what she did to her own sister, as well as being selfish and not wanting to return what she stole - Shirou), while Shirou uses Caliburn to become the new king

And although the protagonist of this part fulfilled her revenge, she is hollow inside, because there is nothing that matters to her anymore, and Merlin, rather than serving a purpose, only facilitated this tragic moment to happen.

It would be curious to see the point of view of the Lady of the Lake, whether or not she would regret what her words caused, since she killed Lancer Alter's few hopes that led her to want to destroy what was once her kingdom, in order to kill Morgan, whom stole everything Artoria cared for

This to me is tragic, and not wanting to tempt fate and say that it can't get any worse, but given that the new King would be looking for the person responsible for Morgan's death, and at this point Lancer Alter wouldn't care what happens to herself , the detail is if this Shirou could remember, recover his memory before killing Lancer Alter, or with Mordred seeking revenge for her mothers death
KnightR1 chapter 25 . 4/30
imma see this stories at 2025 near December
this stories is full of cliffhanger and Tragedy
and the Suspense is suffocating
KnightR1 chapter 25 . 4/30
oh dear Kamael, now i see and known what's ending of this story a bitter tragedy

i mean WTF Author
pugboi33 chapter 25 . 4/30
your such a bitch for this man, WHYYYYYYYY im crying so hard right now
Frost-Spirit-Gunner chapter 25 . 4/30
Oh good lord, the drama and the massive amount of angst that is about to happen, MORE
W8W chapter 25 . 4/30
What am I supposed to feel sorry for Morgan. She made this mess in the first place and what she did now is not genuine attempt to fix things. For this she should tell her husband truth as a first step.
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