Reviews for Fate-In Time: Chaldea Alternative Records
Guest chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
Can’t wait for there fight and her reunion with shirou.
Dasgun chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
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runelt99 chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
Why is merlin complaining, Camelot will fall in original story, Arturia would have same end either way. What did he expect being so vague.

It will end either in tragedy or via Morgan telling the truth and ending in an harem with both Morgan and Alter
Dimihd chapter 18 . 11/17/2023
It's funny to compare Morgan to a pedophile who attacks any victim. Morgan was denied everything from her birth. She was simply superfluous. Everything went to Arturia. But also throughout growing up - everyone used her as the last cheap whore before throwing her out. Including Merlin. Nobody gave her even a particle of goodness. Stripped of all dignity, she achieved all her position and power on her own. And then she is compared to wretched nonentities, like pedophiles. Just LMAO.
growcraft95 chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
Tbh, People saying Merlin and Morgan are people who can't give straight up answer is really true. Especially for Merlin.

Most people forget that Merlin himself is a complex Character. If you see his profile in FGO, it is true that Merlin himself didn't love humanity. He only sees humanity as the biggest entertainment and story He can witness. The only time he cared about someone, it is when He cared for Artoria (Because He is the reason why Artoria can't have a normal life), and when it is about Camelot around the time Uther rule. He himself say most of time he can't understand human emotion, He can only copy what they are feeling from their dream.

So from his perspective, it makes sense that He suggested Artoria to forgive Morgan. Because it is the solution to get a happy ending for Camelot. But not considering Artoria feelings for the matter. This is his flaw and what makes him so interesting.

For Morgan however, she is what you called a victim of her own emotion. She who was already blessed for many things like, being a princess, have outstanding children, and what's even called the fair lady. But get drown by her own envy of Artoria, not appreciating what she already have. Her loved for Camelot blind her in Envy of her own sister for having Camelot and the reason for her tragedy being the one who responsible the most for Camelot downfall. She is what you called a perfect example of a tragic Character, a good person who got corrupted by her own emotion and becoming so different from what she was before.

In Morgan case, she herself knew she can't never be forgiven. She who finally understand what it means to be loved now have to bear the sins of her action. She even knows, that even if she runs to the ends of the world. Artoria will chase her still, because that's the same thing she would do to Artoria if she is in Artoria position. Like Merlin said, the roles are now switch. The only ending i can see this ends is with either Morgan or Artoria died, because their is no way Artoria can forgive Morgan. And their is nothing Morgan can do to be forgiven for her sins. This really interesting timeline, the most interesting i have read.

Also for the people saying the Author want the reader to sympathize for Morgan. The Author never did. It is the reader choice on who they want to side on because their is no right or wrong in this matter. This is what Fate known for, that every action have consequence. Something you thought good might not result into something good. It is complex and only when you get to the bottom of this that you finally understand what you can learn from all of this. The Author really nailed it for the Fate type of writing.
Dimihd chapter 19 . 11/17/2023
As for me, Morgan and Arturia switched destinies here. Yes, Morgana caused a lot of pain before becoming queen, but she didn't do anything that wasn't done to her. If we want to condemn what she was, we must not follow the same path of vengeful rage. Artoria has to prove that a person can be better than this. Or at least Shirou can break this vicious cycle of hatred.
MeteorElDrago chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
Fuck forgiveness the moment she comes out erase her out of existence. Mogan will either die a brutal gruesome death at the hands of the monster she created. And it's nothing short of what she deserves for what she did to her little sister.
Mard Geer03 chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
eh(shrug) I'm with Laltoria. KILLL
JustDusty chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
How do you expect us, as readers, to forgive Morgan for what she did after you wrote her that way?
Change doesn't matter, the crimes of the past don't just get wiped away.
Pedos can change too, but they're still going to spend the rest of their existence in a jail cell.
Midnight1123 chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
gotta love tragedy
Guest chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
Yknow, there are other genres besides tragedy right?
MetallicWolf-FN2004 chapter 24 . 11/17/2023
Damn… this is probably Arturia at her absolute worst state. Becoming a monster that would even put Demons and dragons to shame. The only way I see this ending (within the five chapter story you do with each variant before you make the ends of the stories) is with the battle with Morgan and Arturia being interrupted by Shirou, and once Arturia learns of their relationship as husband and wife would impale Shirou in a crazed revenge driven state in order to make Morgan feel the same pain of losing a lover as her (which would be ironic as in the Fate in time fic Morgan wanted to make Arturia feel her losing everything like she did) only for Shirou’s helm to break, revealing to Arturia that he was alive. Arturia, realising what she had done, would enter a full blown sobbing breakdown as she had mortally wounded the one person she had ever loved. The battle would either end with Morgan taking advantage of Arturia’s distraction and blast her away and teleport herself and Shirou back to Camalot to get him treated, leaving Arturia to continue her breakdown and enter a state of utter self loathing towards herself. Or Arturia would accompany Morgan back to Camelot in order to get Shirou treated and learn of the full truth from Morgan and the realisation that she and shirou had fallen in love and had a child, whether that will lead to bloodshed or heartbreak or (as unlikely as it sounds) a reconciliation between the sisters is unknown until we come back to this story after Saber lily and Saber OG lostbelts.
Dimihd chapter 20 . 11/16/2023
Shirou stood in the middle of a steaming wasteland. The Demon King continued to raging. Morgana sat reclining, leaning against a stone, and Merlin supported the magical protective dome. Merlin's gaze turned to their situation and he desperately searched for a way out using his clairvoyance. Among hundreds of options, there was only one that could bring salvation to this world. Shirou, listen carefully to what I tell you, Merlin said. Shirou was tense, beads of sweat rolling down his face, but he nodded decisively. Then Merlin continued: there is only one option to save the world. When I restrict the demon king's movements for a short moment, you must take her and jam it in!
...Wat?!
Shirou.. The Demon King is actually my little sister. I don't like this plan, but.. only hard sex..( I said it) with you can straighten her mind. No time. Just do it, Morgana said.
Guest chapter 24 . 11/16/2023
Merlin is unbearable. He was unbearable by the end of the original story and he's unbearable here. There is this constant incongruity between how you clearly want us to perceive him (wise, well-intentioned) and the way he's written (making things worse for Arturia, refusing to give actual answers).
The same applies to Morgan, to an even greater degree. She's a monster but again, you don't seem to realize you are writing her that way. It's like you expect the readers to see only how she changed after falling in love with Shirou and forget what she did to him. She essentially raped Shirou but I doubt there will be any consequences for it. I doubt Shirou will even scold her for it.
It's weird how you clearly want the story to be taken seriously but at the same time you are unable to engage with serious topics.
TheMist33 chapter 24 . 11/16/2023
This direction is my favorite so far of the Arturias. Morgan falling for Shirou is brilliant.

Can’t wait for the next chapter!
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