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dinabar chapter 1 . 2/18/2021
Ah lockdown is a strange time, never watched LoM before and loving it. You have the characterisation spot on here. I love the references to Test Card Girl in this and it all plays out very naturally. You have cleverly recreated the scene, with authentic sounding dialogue and the movements/ non verbal communication between the two of them spot on too. Great stuff, thanks for writing.