Reviews for Proof |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have no idea why what Faramir did works, but it works, all right, and I bloody well love you for it. |
![]() ![]() Nice! I usually don't like LotR fanfiction, but I enjoyed this one. I like your writing style, but it seems a little cold - no emotions. Maybe this is what you intended, I don't know. Anyway, good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! It's good to be reminded that Faramir is *not* a man to be trifled with, even at this age. And I envy people who can stay cool in the heat... -Rose |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still very good. I am enjoying your writing quite a lot - and I especially like your dialogue. Faramir's a great character, and you've made him and all the others compelling. _ Toodles - IMP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chilling and excellent. Good portrayal of Faramir leading his men. |
![]() ![]() o...interesting take on how Faramir took over the Company of Rangers at Ithilien. Will there be more? I hope so! I really like this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yikes...Chilling...but very well done and respectful of the inevitable ruthless military necessities...(Still, am surprised it was hanging and not, say, be-heading.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very well written, and it remained consistent throughout. I really quite enjoyed it; the characters were dealt with respectfully, the pace was consistent. And it was both thoughtful and rather thought-provoking. It showed a side of Faramir that I'd never thought of, I don't know - he seemed both like the one in the book - and unlike him. And it is also describing a time and situation the book really does not touch on at all. Yet all in all it makes it all very real and compeling. Thanks. Toodles - IMP |