I just cannot get past this first chapter. Harry is not acting like he's 11, he's acting like he's 5.

Wonderful story. I loved how Harry found a loving family, and romance with Cora. I enjoyed how it left canon behind. Thanks!

From what I’ve read here, writing a story can be challenging… and while I may not 'completely' agree with what’s happening for the plot, I’m happy that you’ve completed your work. Lord knows how many fan-fictions (in TOTAL) remain incomplete via indefinite hiatus… kudos to you.

Hmm, Cora seems to be a bit of a control freak concering Harry, if you ask me.

40% of story is gift unwrapping...
Which is totaly fine, i just find it could be with less
Would gladly read a oneshot with small summary of their childrens life or something
Overall 7.5/10

Really enjoyed this story. Cora's age kept confusing me. i kept thinking after first year that she was graduating each following year haha, but I think that was just me. Anyway, I loved the relationship between Harry and all the friends/family. They were well written. Well done overall and thanks for sharing!

honestly this has to be one of the most interesting stories I have listened to on this site well done on it

This was a sweet ending to an amazing story. I very much enjoyed reading through it. Nice work.

One of the best "looongshot" of romance I've ever read! Thanks for this wonderful 2 hours of good reading :)

7 paragraphs just to introduce the last gift Cora got him. Jesus Christ dude talk about getting nowhere with the plot writing like that

enjoyed reading

using affection and communication or lack thereof ad punishment is just wrong on so many levels...that was rather extreme and unfair of cora...especially for that long? yikes..I was honestly half hoping Harry would start to distance himself from her until she came to her senses and promised to not withhold affection and apologized for doing so...

this is honestly one the most wholesome and heartwarming stories I have ever read! :3

this is honestly one the most wholesome and heartwarming stories I have ever read! :3

cora Avery is being kinda mean to Harry. how can she expect him to go to her for help with such things as the troll if she refuses to talk to him but once every 2 weeks?