looks good, I enjoyed it

That was beautifully written. That's all I can really say about this piece. For a one shot thing it is...wow.

Aw! That is the sweetest story I've ever read! It's so cute (well the ending anyway.)!

Powerfully written, very methaphorical.

Hello Deb, I had a feeling this might have been your piece, cos I know how much you love using original Characters. Anyways this is brillient, you should write more standalones, although I'm still waiting for an update of 'On the Run'...

Talk to you soon

Rose

Hey This was a great story on how an Outsider would view the Transgenic community, the hate and fear of what they would not understand. And Alac giving Hannah Joshua's old place at the end of the story so that Hannah and her children could have a better life.

Keep on writing, you have a talent for this.

Shannon Hearn