Please if you'll read this, I unfortunately picked up the story this year, I absolutely love it. If you still feel like writing you should absolutely continue it!

I really think you should come back to this story, you have an interesting character that makes sense, with a really fun power system to build off of. Honestly my biggest critique is your MC is a bit run of the mill SI, but even that is totally fine and doesn’t detract from the rest of this awesome story.

Nice reference

For those who have never had dango. Pink is sweet. White is nuetral tasting and is more a texture thing, and the green is kinda bitter like if green tea was mixed into the flour

Well, it had its ups and downs but it was a fairly good story overall. I hate that it ended so abruptly but there's nothing to be done about it really.

My only real complaint about the story (excluding how you shortened the later chapters) is how the MC seems to have completely forgotten everything from his past life. It's supposed to be a self-insert story with metaknowledge of the Naruto world but he seems just as clueless as everyone else in most cases. Hell, he even seems to have forgotten that Naruto was the Jinchuriki of the Kyuubi or about the Sand/Sound Invasion entirely!

Overall, the story started out very good but I slowly lost interest due to his memory loss. Still, it was good enough for me to read this far so I would still say it's a decent read.

It's sad that the chapters have gotten so short ever since you started adding all the Patreon plugs. Seems like you only shortened the chapters in order to give Patreon members more 'bonus chapters' or something.

I can barely even enjoy reading such short chapters.

Yeesh, his memory failing him is just sad and a poor justification for this idiocy imo. If he KNEW he would live in the Naruto world from now on, those memories should have been at the forefront of his mind — even IF 30 years had passed.

That should have been his main focus and driving force; granting him the largest advantage possible to survive the coming struggles. Instead, he completely disregarded and forgot about it like an idiot. Very poor justification and execution imo, though it's still a fairly entertaining story so far.

Did he completely forget about Ranmaru's Dojutsu? That would be an amazing boon for him if he could have them implanted.

Thank goodness! I was worried she would move on while he was on such a long mission. It would be well within reason but would have left a VERY bad taste in my mouth if they ended up together afterwards. Hopefully nothing like that happens after this little declaration.

This guy is clearly delusional if he thinks any of that will work out. Body Flicker is debatable but him getting the Hidden Mist and Eight Gates techniques is just wishful thinking.

meh trash mc

shame the way you made FML that annoying btch

weird direction

update?

having a mentor kinda destroys the whole point of a Naruto Self Insert. The whole purpose is supposed to be using your knowledge of the anime and the maturity of an adult to jump ahead of all the little kids. You've literally thrown 90% of that out now.