I think I may die before this gets another update and that makes me sad

Real

This man is just spitting bullshit i could never be able to this in my life how do you do ainz teach me your ways!

Why is 11 the same as 10?

Idle note: the red orb in Ainz' body isn't actually a part of him, it's a World Item rewarded to Ainz Ool Gown the guild for defeating the amassed coalition of 1500 other Players attacking Nazarik en masse. So technically it's an item, though if I remember right it's one that's effect increases the longer it stays equipped, so if it were to be removed much of its bolstering effect would be lost. General increasing buffs, though I don't remember the specifics except that it also increases damage against Dragons, because apparently why not?

there are a lot of well-written details in this story) a good idea with a backstory and what a laugh, comments about Ainz's appearance are just a laugh, Celestine trolled Lulu?

google translation: maybe few people will agree with my judgment, but you perfectly described the world around you, I can completely believe that this is the Middle Ages, with knights always considering themselves right and believing in prejudices, and stupid people who keep their heads in their asses when they are poked into irrefutable evidence of their correctness apponent, I believe that these are poorly educated people with everything that follows, great job!

Woah, woah, woah! Now THAT is quite a turn of events, so in a way, our bonehead got himself an aspect of god for getting transfered into this universe, ngl this is the first one that I found to have a race changer as an ability from the get go.

This is what happen when you got a hentai specified universe, dang lore and mindset doesn't make a single sense when it is adopted to a normal one TwT

It's a good one tho, albeit a tad infuriating yet understandable when the arguments come in lmao

I've seen you make a number of consistent mistakes up until now. You're, your, there, their, they're are only a few examples.

Quiet, quit, quite are another three. night and knight is another example, though this last one you only made once. In this chapter even, I believe. Finally, you are also inconsistent in writing either flora or Flora with a capital F. A name of a person should always without exception be written with a capital letter.

As far as I know, there are absolutely zero exceptions to this rule. Up until now, there have also been a handful of tense issues, but those are few, but since I already mentioned the rest, I might as well mention it anyway.

I still have a couple of chapters to go, but I wanted to mention this, before I forgot about it.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story.

Kingdark.

Oooh, the first chapter without Aniz in any way, not even a mention of any kind! Certainly new and interesting, but not unpleasant. I seek more.

Also, have you considered installing Grammarly? It is very useful and can help you deal with your grammar and spelling mistakes. Also sometimes annoying, but that's manageable.

Welp, I'm all caught up on this. Time to read about what bullshit your Jack gets into in Mass Effect. Can't wait!

Reapers: That is the greatest Pirate I've ever seen.

Captain Jack Fucking Sparrow: Drunkenly crashes his ship into another and flawlessly wins. Somehow.

You definitely need to work on grammar and punctuation. Nearly every comma (,) that you’ve placed is not where it should be, or is present in a sentence that doesn’t need it.

This line right here, near the bottom of the chapter:
Three stories up, bounce off of it, crap, I'm doomed."
it should be read as:
Three stories up, and I bounce off of it… crap, I'm doomed."
OR
Three stories up, and I bounce off of it. Crap, I'm doomed."

As to the commas, this one here has one, but shouldn’t:
"Did you, reinforce the window?"

Then this, which is in the middle of the chapter:
". . . . . I was very different once. However in these lands, what I once was, is less important than what I currently am, and what I may do."
Commas where they shouldn’t be, or too many. It should read as (pay attention to where the commas change):
". . . . . I was very different once. However, in these lands, what I once was is less important than what I currently am, and what I may do."

Decent story, but really needs some fixing up.

Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Outstanding story you got here

Ainzzzzzz!