|Reviews for Trapped|
| dondena chapter 4 . 4/11
Can't wait for more! Really good story!
| dondena chapter 3 . 4/11
Poor Brooklyn that he had to go thru that scary preparation. They could have at least tried to explain what needed to be done in a kinder manner. But they must have been Quarrymen too. Hope Brooklyn remembers what he heard about those meanies.
| A nony mouse chapter 2 . 3/16
Just read your first two chapters; I really like this, looking forward to the next chapter! Your characterization is very good, and the action is done well. I loved Broadway's mixing up the french food.