Reviews for A King's Path
Smutley Do-Wrong chapter 12 . 4/6
Omake:

Harry mock stage whispers to Fleur as the Gryffindors approach. "Would this carriage have an exit opposite this entrance."

Omake 2: Fleur pauses at the exit after leading Harry through the carriage to the opposite side. She waved her wand, enlarging a porthole size window to downsize, shrugging, saying it was best she could do. Then offering him "sanctuary" in her quarters, for long enough, the Gryffindors will give up, and leave.
Johnmau chapter 33 . 3/5
what was that!? i liked this story, but that tantrum was he threw just ruined the whole broth for me! all of the tantrums he threw! and his constant cries of "Voldemort's back", and "diggory died to you-know-who!" is f**king pathetic! like a broken record, he'll sing that line every chance he gets. he knows they wont believe him. why waste so much time and energy on "sheep." i thought he'd have better contol of his anger after getting rid of the Horcrux, not just his magic.
Guest chapter 26 . 3/2
I don't know why this author is so insistent on making his MC act like a moron.

Sure, he might not have known how Voldy would attack him, but he knew it would happen. He KNEW that he would not be getting outta the third task without getting attacked. Yet, he disregarded caution and grabbed the completely LAST PART of the third task, expecting nothing to happen?

As for the fight between MC and Voldy... it was just stupid. Even when the MC woke up after being AK'd. The first thing he wanted to cast at Voldy was Stupefy? Really? I lost all my faith in this MC's intelligence.

Then when he returned to Hogwarts, he started screaming that Voldy is back. Like... what good would it do to him? He KNEW it would just tarnish his reputation and NOBODY would believe him anyway. It would just make enemies for him.

No. It is simply the author wanting his MC to act like in canon. Nothing more and nothing less. If the MC was smart and actually used his friggin brain, he would think about the consequences of his actions and be more on guard. I would be okay if things did not go well for MC. But here he is just doing retarded things to progress the plot in the way the author wants.
Veritocracy chapter 33 . 2/29
Really Great work, looking forward to possible continuation in the future, know you have me wishing you luck
Guest chapter 33 . 2/24
Pathetic. Just like a mad dog. Shame to nobe and ancient houses of pitter and slytherin.
Guest chapter 32 . 2/24
Pathetic. A pure blood heir showing his emotions. A living shame to mighty house of potter and slytheryn
Guest chapter 33 . 2/7
Soo...it's been like 18 months.. hope you do come back? If ever? Or
Grosvenor chapter 4 . 1/3
Not relative ,a descendant and too not to . Do get a dictionary !
richdsils chapter 33 . 12/14/2023
so a floating spark has burnt out it seems seeing as the last update was some 16 months past? shame goodish story so far
Jeremiah Malkai chapter 33 . 12/8/2023
It's a shame to see it end, but I thoroughly enjoyed the story. As you pointed out, it took a lot of ideas from other fics. But it stands on it's own as a 4th year re-write.

Thank you for all the hard work.
wandamarie chapter 33 . 11/24/2023
thank you
wandamarie chapter 32 . 11/24/2023
thank you
wandamarie chapter 31 . 11/24/2023
thank you for the story so far
wandamarie chapter 30 . 11/24/2023
thank you
wandamarie chapter 29 . 11/24/2023
thank you for the story so far
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