I love how smooth the dialogues went. Can't believe I read all 8 chapters in under an hour. Thanks for creating this wonderful novel! Excited to read more

.08 percent with sufficient willpower
2.3 percent,
I used almost three times as much power as I should have, still it's not
There is an error here, as is more than 10x as much.

does the superman symbol for the blue ring stay or can it be changed

Really good start, I cant wait to see where you will go with this

Nice!

Knows Supergirl wants a daughter called Barbara. Wears a 'Kryptonian Wedding Ring'. She's going to think they used to be an item isn't she?

Love the story, keep it up

Alan and John need to be REALLY careful with that gold. While it’s just about impossible to make gold permanently radioactive, temporarily lethally radioactive is another matter. That gold will be too hot to safely handle without an environmental shield for around a month, possibly as long as two months, as the unstable radioactive isotope of gold decays back into the stable non-radioactive kind.

You have a stellar cartography error. LHS 2520 is approximately 42 light years from Earth, not 27.1 - the only star about 27.1 light years out is Xi Ursa Majoris at 27.2 light years.

Awesome! please update it soon!

A non-paranoid Batman? See the old 'Super Friends' cartoons. If you think he's creepy now, wait until you see him /smiling/ all the time! *shudders*

Sorry, its just there is no story here.

I knew it! Somewhat. That thing about Xand-ur.
Reminds me about his trip through hell.

love this story please keep on writing i would love to read more keep up the great work i hope to read more soon!

Love your story so far!