Reviews for The End of the Elemental Nations |
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mattias.akerlund.71 chapter 15 . 1/18 how long is this gonna be on hiatus? |
Norepinefrina chapter 15 . 9/16/2024 Do you plan on updating this fic? |
Mnchblackname chapter 2 . 6/21/2024 Fantástic chapter bro |
Mnchblackname chapter 1 . 6/21/2024 Fuck its amazing, AMAZING CHAPTER BRO |
huzzoptimistically chapter 15 . 3/25/2024 next chapter please |
huzzoptimistically chapter 9 . 3/24/2024 dam that's the scary shit of women in that underground. |
Life is not fair chapter 15 . 2/12/2024 Bro this made story is so unique i even got nervous for what was going to happej next (100% not scared rn) |
zx20000006 chapter 15 . 1/29/2024 It is an absolute crime that this fanfiction is abandoned. It is so unique I can’t find any other naruto fanfiction that even comes close to this. I absolutely love everything about this fanfiction I was hoping that naruto would make a deal with the green chakra consciousness where he would set boundaries and they would work together with kurama to dominate the EN. Like I said it is truly a tragedy that this fanfiction was a abandoned |
Guest chapter 15 . 1/9/2024 Excelente cap cuando sale el proximo |
Brandon chapter 15 . 11/28/2023 This is stupid I had to stop reading it it's trash |
a fan of this chapter 8 . 10/8/2023 And here I stop reading, seriously, why the hell are you going to make them separate? Shouldn't they continue together wherever they have to go? and tents? oh really? now no more acid rain capable of collapsing buildings? I haven't read even 3 paragraphs of this chapter and you've already made me stop reading your story... Furthermore, it is not very difficult to see that you do not let the characters have even a second of rest, every moment something happens to screw them without rest or anything, the story lacks any kind of sense or logic, I have come to read a post-apocalyptic world , not something coming from a deranged mind, where every day there is a different weather (without any kind of explanation) where ACID rain can destroy buildings, but not bones or trees, where mutant monsters appear out of nowhere (seriously, 0 explanation of how each of those creatures could have appeared... there is not enough time for so many different rare creatures to appear) It's a shame that it's the only interesting post-apocalyptic Naruto... but oh well This would have been a much better story without so much exaggerated change of climate, without so many strange monsters from the beginning and without so many holes in the script (or sense that some of them, for BREATHING ONCE, turn into dust and the rest do not believe it, but others could breathe perfectly... just to give an example) Anyway, the story is abandoned, so it doesn't matter what I say. |
a fan of this chapter 7 . 10/8/2023 suddenly a premonitory dream where 2 armies of hundreds or THOUSANDS face each other... where did so many come from? If in all of Konoha only 6 have survived... or is it that in Konoha everyone is idiots and everywhere else they are intelligent enough to survive in greater numbers? ridiculous...and stupid Not to mention the giant monsters, the green chakra that apparently has a life of its own and is capable of corrupting Naruto when the Kyubi couldn't do it... seriously, I like where this story is going less and less. I'm going to tell you something else... where did so much sand come from to make Konoha look like a desert? Yes, there are still protective walls that should prevent there from being so much sand inside the town (and the walls must be very resistant, in the canyon they withstood buildings and earth being pushed by Pain's shinra tensei) and now naruto is as intelligent as a nara in terms of combat strategies? come on... now the monsters from the movie tremors but on steroids? and let's not talk about the fact that kurenai has already thought of naruto as her god... what nonsense Now that I think about it, if acid rain breaks buildings... how come there are still trees? How does the weather change so quickly? sandstorm, tornadoes, thunder, acid rain, killer snow that is alive and knows how to break buildings... ... and they leave Konoha... I sincerely think that it is becoming more and more exaggerated, more ridiculous and more difficult to believe... everything seems to be moving too fast... especially these creatures, it is impossible that in 2 months there will be so many creatures so different from everything what was in the world before the meteorite... which is killing the desire to read the latest published chapters, because with your author's note you have already made it clear that there is even more of these things... |
a fan of this chapter 6 . 10/8/2023 Now Naruto is ceasing to be Naruto because of the green chakra... why do I feel like I'm going to stop reading before the last chapter of this story? Honestly, we have no explanations for anything, Naruto has not mentioned how he got the green chakra, it makes no sense that suddenly the chakra has disappeared almost completely (technically nothing in this story makes sense, not the weather, not the monsters, nothing at all. ) I just hope that at least by the time I get to the last published chapter (if it ever arrives) something of all the nonsense of this story will make sense... I highly doubt it. |
a fan of this chapter 5 . 10/8/2023 This is already stupid, the snow moves by itself and tries to catch people? Does snow know how to break buildings? Is the air so toxic that a breath of air you take will turn into dust? But it only affects other people and not those who have been away for most of the month? Then why were there corpses on the ground if when they breathe they turn into dust? It's fine that you want to make a post-apocalyptic world, but you're exaggerating it too much... Up to this point we have been able to see strange monsters that seem to have a shape similar to that of humans, giant and mutant insects, acid rain, sand storms, snow storms, an earthquake... we experienced enough heat to make you go crazy. short sleeve to extreme cold in days... I honestly don't know what movie, book or game you based it on... but it doesn't make any sense. |
a fan of this chapter 3 . 10/8/2023 You're already exaggerating, mutant monsters... it's only been 1 month since this happened... and you still insist on saving the Uchiha but no one else from the village... fucking Uchiha fanatic that you are... If in all the apocalyptic movies that I have seen there are several survivors in cities the size of Konoha it does not make sense that all but 4 are alive and that curiously the uchiha who should be half dead from the battle against Gaara is one of the survivors, But are everyone else in that battle except Naruto dead? Have Sakura, Shino and Shikamaru who were in the same battle also died? At least you could have given some logic to your story and not say, well, everyone dies except this one, this one and this one... and I don't care that more people should be alive simply because of logic. I like your story but you are exaggerating it too much, where did so many different types of monsters come from? Why do they look like that? Why aren't there more survivors? |