A great story with a strong conclusion. The romance was wonderful. Dark, for fairly obvious reasons, but you handled it very maturely. It could've easily been an edge-fest or overly idealized but instead, it became a study of two broken people finding each other and mending each other, warts and all.

You did your husband proud and I'm glad you finished this story for him. Rest in Peace, Jack.

I know it's been a while but I binged this. Very sweet, and about as well as I could imagine it being. Honestly, someday doing a compilation of chapters of random moments of the characters' lives in the future would be nice, if you ever decided to do more.

I really enjoyed the story, there were some slow points but every story has those, I really enjoyed the one part that was written in first person and wish more were written that way but thats just personal opinion, but again overall a great story that had the characters seem human.

This is honestly one of the best fanfic I've read

Wow. just wow. This was a fantastic story! Both you and Jack did such a great job with this story. You should be proud of yourself for not only completing such an enormous task, but for also completing Jack's last story. I am so proud of you for carrying on Jack's goal of this story!

I loved the story and I wish you all the best! 10/10

I am so sorry for you loss. I can not imagine the pain you had to endure, and I hope you have found some peace.

If it is any consolation, your husband’s works lives on. He had such a way with storytelling that is not comparable. He seemed to be truly gifted.

Loved the fic sucks it ended with shippuden having a boat load of content

One of the best fanfiction I ever read, you did an awesome work. I believe Jack is so proud of you in Heaven.

Replacing Naruto's morals by making them Shikamaru's morals is certainly a choice

Im curious, doesnt Naruto know the Shadow Clone jutsu? Numbers wouldve helped there

Oh theyre not 12?

i just want to say jack would be proud i may. not have know him personally at all...but i felt like i did as i read the story, and to learn of his misfortune hurt... but then i was incredibly surprised with your choice to continue the story and its really beautiful your writing has alot of depth the story is incredible and amazing you probably wont see this but honestly you did amazing with this story and i hope you are doing okay ~thank you so much for this storythank you jack may your soul rest peacefully~

unbelievably enjoyable, thanks for this its been an amazing ride reading the story you did an amazing job finishing it.

good, incredibly so.

holy shit this was entertaining as hell to read, incredibly good relationships between the characters and the interactions between events and ways the story was taken are incredibly well thought out, just how the interactions between naruto and satsuki grew and developed into the love they have for one another was done in a way that felt right with how they were written.

Look forward to reading the next story up and going along as its made though a rereading of this story is going to be done atleast before the end of the year.

Thanks for completing an incredible story!