My poor monkey boy Sun has been ruined… sad

Everyone’s got a chain scythe now. You really gotta learn what people’s weapons are. Qrow, Ren and now Blake have been described to have chain scythes

The White Fang quite literally doesn’t give two shits about Blake. It’s just Adam

City of Vale, not Vale Colony which you seem to be obsessed with colonies

Yeah, i doubt Weiss actually likes drinking and dancing or even goes into a nightclub or bar. You think Volume 1 Weiss would even look at a bar?

I’m glad he hasn’t forgotten about the cowboy hat

Jaune could make chemistry paintballs to add to the metal as a delivery agent.

Why not just add grains of other metals like copper, iron and zinc to the metal blobs? That would fix it and add a grinding property to the liquid metal. Stronger metals being added as grains would also make it more durable for shielding.

Easy fix. Iron sang is mixed in with it.

“Invincible Girl” is much better for her alliteration since Pyrrha is supposed to be like Achilles. They look invincible and unstoppable but end up at the end of an arrow. “Goddess of Victory” just doesn’t match her overall as her alliteration isn’t Nike

meh

The colors of dust have names. Just go on RWBY Fandom and they have all the names listed with the color they belong to. It’s pretty detailed so it’s a good source of info

I mean… if you wanted to make the characters unlikeable then you succeeded. Which utterly sucks because i actually enjoy your Ron story but this just reads like hatred towards both genders and all characters just to seem “different”

another well done chapter, eager to see how these beautiful little flaps of a butterflies wings affects everything, also take them liberties; remnang went iff the rails when 2 brother gods got pissy.

Yang isn’t a misandrist… literally watch the first episode and you’ll see her checking out the guys because she hadn’t figured out she also likes women until the later seasons where she begins finding herself