I love what is going on in the story so far, a good reason as to why Jaune is behind his peers. Interesting that Jaune would be forced to have multiple wives and that it is expected of him. I wonder what they would do to his sister since she seems to be his closest guard and the Arcs would lose any benefit they might have gotten from siphoning Jaune's aura. I hope you take the time to develop any of Jaune's relationship since from what we have seen he would not want to get involved since his family would have forced him into a relationship. I would if Weiss and Jaune ever met or know of each other since there family might have arranged marriages for them. Also Freemen as a last name really? The chapters are a bit short but I still enjoyed it and hope you update soon love where it's going.

love this so far. small note if you use the fanfiction editor before uploading you can actually create seperation with a line separator listening to this with audio repeating your name about 10 times is kinda painful lol

love fanfiction app for the ai audible version of stories but that can definitely hurt with the creative versions of seperation some authors use who use other software to make their work

Seems interesting. Please do not rush the harem aspect though.

You should find a way to split some of the bigger text-rectangles into smaller ones. Will make it &much& easier to read.

I read ahead on AO3 and this story is just getting btter and better can't wait to see where you take it

And thanks for another greate chapter! Love this story so far, not gonna lie!

Interesting. I am now waiting for more.

I have to say, the interaction between the doctor and Jaune feels really organic. From the guilt collapse to the excitement at the project. I love this.

I really like how you expanded his semblance beyond just augmentation to matter manipulation, really gives him more options as a sabotage agent as much as front line combat (weakening the metal holdin gup a paladins leg and structural frame for example

Damn this escape is exciting as hell and I don't actually find the arc family prevention trope to be to unbelievable with the cult mentality you've demonstrated (the collar was toeing the line but I can see why it was implemented, what they were doing with the crystals though makes me wonder if it actually is benevolence or just a family of jacques (at least he and weiss will have more to bond over)).

I think half the reason is it's incredibly well written, dialogue, flow, and pov are just generally immersive and enjoyable. Always hyped for romance so hoping to see that nailed as well.

I'll be following along, thanks for the read!

Man kinda wish this was a Emerald x Jaune story, but I’m fine with the harem in the future depending on who’s going to be in it.

Ya this caught my eye and I like how you don’t do cliche shit like he stole the plane and got away or slew the grim but relied purely on his cleverness

I gotta find your ao3 to read this and catch up to whatever is the latest version now

This is actually great! Can't wait for more!

Ah, reading this again after reading it on AO3 will have to do as i wait for new chapters. Ah patience, my greatest friend and enemy.

Interesting I like the premise and there’s a fair balance of it not feeling irrational as the arcs naturally are behaving like the schnees just out of love and insane thinking that they can control every inch of jaunes life.

Very curious how he will manage to stay on the run given the atlas elite with an endless army of robots and huntsman can find him whenever they want. I’m surprised he doesn’t have a chip implanted in him to track his every whereabouts.