Fantastic second book! Really enjoying how you are developing the characters.

Okay I don't know if you read these reviews or not, but you are going into too much detail on trivial crap that really does not enhance the story line. Who cares what the princess mom and dad would think it's not relevant. That's just one example, these ramblings just tend to make the story boring.

These are the last three people that needed to show up now.

I think Zane sold them out

I wonder if anyone sensed the fidelus going up?

called it.

I mean, worst case scenario, they cut his fucking arm off and Harry magics up a new one like Voldemort with Wormtail's hand. except without the whole self-strangulation thing. unless Harry's into that kind of thing.

at first I thought maybe terabtek, but those bastards aren't exactly stealthy or agile. still leaning towards Sith Alchemy, though.

rakata, then?

so, Magna Guard? honestly, given the chance, if salvage all the separatists Droids. though only for scrap for the B1s. my priority would be the Magna Guard, Droideka, and Commandos, though. also vulture Droids.

...yeah, I don't get why you don't just slit the throat of that mandalorian security director and be done with it.

curious about whether you are going to bring in Talon Karrde.

You got a bad habit of writing "The captain" and "The older man"... It disturbs the flow, just call them Harry and Mercer, that's their names lol...

So happy this story continued! It's such a fun filled read. Thanks for taking the time to write and share your stories. :D

Still enjoying the hell out of the story! Now, on to the next one!