Reviews for Heavy Rains and Subway Trains
TheGracefulHuntress chapter 1 . 7/17/2022
This is just…so cute. Really love ur mortal AUs
CharneX chapter 1 . 6/12/2021
holy shit this made me stop and think about life.
guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2021
OH. MY. GOD-
THAT WAS SO GOOD-
I don't have words-
PensieveThoughts chapter 1 . 4/26/2021
Hope you write more one-shots! This was great.
Blaze Zion chapter 1 . 4/15/2021
I really love your story, it deserves a lot of audience. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top
Kaizer1008 chapter 1 . 4/5/2021
This is awesome! I was able to talk about the book after I read it. You did well! ... If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top
Matthew1196 chapter 1 . 3/20/2021
I just wanted to stop by and say that this was fantastic. The way you write is wonderful and I appreciated the storytelling a lot, even if it was just a one-shot; it said many things.
RED2017 chapter 1 . 3/16/2021
π‘¨π’π’šπ’π’π’† 𝒄𝒂𝒏 π’•π’‚π’Œπ’† π’šπ’π’–π’“ π’π’Šπ’‡π’†, 𝒃𝒖𝒕 𝒏𝒐𝒕 π’˜π’‰π’‚π’• π’šπ’π’– π’ƒπ’†π’π’Šπ’†π’—π’† π’Šπ’.
Nice little one shot. It's not much, just a little moment in the vast scheme of things. Maybe not a scheme, but I think you get what I mean. Pretty nice how you strung this together. Bittersweet. Lovely.
Impressive how you managed to stretch this little one shot out from just a simple quote and drive that point home. Thought I'd share a quote I like as well :).
Sorry for the delay, been pretty busy lately. Stay safe man.
Hope you have a nice one!
Cya,
RED
SpartanBoi chapter 1 . 3/14/2021
I'm glad to see you've posted something! I should probably join that discord so I know when you are posting new works instead of checking your profile every couple days but that's too much work.

Pretty good oneshot, maybe it was a bit weird that he was joking so soon after his mom's funeral but I guess everyone deals with grief their own way.
Calamity J chapter 1 . 3/13/2021
That’s adorable
1questingdreamer chapter 1 . 3/11/2021
Aww shucks
BabaLooWho chapter 1 . 3/11/2021
Hi... I loved this. Your writing is amazing, truly. And I guess I'm doing fine. How about you? :)
Ruudog chapter 1 . 3/11/2021
Lovely story, enjoyable to read. I’m personally struggling with school and the whole pandemic thing, so this is a nice positive in life. Great way of using a quote!
bookaholic4ever chapter 1 . 3/11/2021
This was beautiful, it made me cry and laugh. I loved it.
WolfOfSilverGoddessArtemis chapter 1 . 3/11/2021
Monke, good shit.