Reviews for Heavy Rains and Subway Trains |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is justβ¦so cute. Really love ur mortal AUs |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy shit this made me stop and think about life. |
![]() ![]() OH. MY. GOD- THAT WAS SO GOOD- I don't have words- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you write more one-shots! This was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your story, it deserves a lot of audience. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! I was able to talk about the book after I read it. You did well! ... If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to stop by and say that this was fantastic. The way you write is wonderful and I appreciated the storytelling a lot, even if it was just a one-shot; it said many things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() π¨πππππ πππ ππππ ππππ ππππ, πππ πππ ππππ πππ πππππππ ππ. Nice little one shot. It's not much, just a little moment in the vast scheme of things. Maybe not a scheme, but I think you get what I mean. Pretty nice how you strung this together. Bittersweet. Lovely. Impressive how you managed to stretch this little one shot out from just a simple quote and drive that point home. Thought I'd share a quote I like as well :). Sorry for the delay, been pretty busy lately. Stay safe man. Hope you have a nice one! Cya, RED |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad to see you've posted something! I should probably join that discord so I know when you are posting new works instead of checking your profile every couple days but that's too much work. Pretty good oneshot, maybe it was a bit weird that he was joking so soon after his mom's funeral but I guess everyone deals with grief their own way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thatβs adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww shucks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi... I loved this. Your writing is amazing, truly. And I guess I'm doing fine. How about you? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story, enjoyable to read. Iβm personally struggling with school and the whole pandemic thing, so this is a nice positive in life. Great way of using a quote! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful, it made me cry and laugh. I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Monke, good shit. |