Reviews for Crown on a Maelstrom
badame2001 chapter 7 . 6/22
please continue
Omni Fanbase Shipper chapter 7 . 1/22
I hope to see more of this story, even if it is highly unlikely.
pain17ification chapter 7 . 1/17
Looking forward to seeing more, and I really hope Naruto and Bowsette become a thing :)
DA Exodus chapter 7 . 12/18/2023
this story has been a very delightful read. i can wait to see the next few chapters and the race is gonna be epic. i hope naruto wins and getd answers from bowsette cause im looking forward to this massively xD
badame2001 chapter 7 . 12/14/2023
Good job
Kenka chapter 7 . 11/16/2023
Flames will feed the Baby Yoshis.

I am enjoying this fic immensely, Still invested in the mystery of what is happening to Naruto, since you made Bowser a female in her previous master form, I guess that Naruto is not gonna switch genders, but something else is up.
RikuUzumaki9 chapter 7 . 11/1/2023
When I read the story again, I saw that Bowsette was always a woman, which gives me a theory that the crown only gives a human form to women depending on what species it is and that effect will not affect men since it is I would say how in RPG games the female monsters look more human and the male monsters look more monstrous, which makes me understand that the supercrown only gave that to Bowsette because she was a woman, but for Naruto it would be like in Ranma where someone was changed in gender for The temperature of the water for Naruto would be almost the same, only that it would be done with his chakra, as his chakra is dense because he is an Uzumaki. The illusions of the transformation become technically solid and realistic, so that effect would be a lagoon where it would not be permanent, but it would be. like a block in the transformation where just canceling the technique returns but it has no impact on the chakra running out thanks to the benefits of the crown
Monster King chapter 7 . 9/22/2023
Awesome work I just hope you don't make hiruzen or konoha the bad guys in this story that us overdone i would also love to see sasuke not be bashed also it is overdone in fanfiction but I will read as long as the story is good just no ooc charecter bashing but even then as I said i will read the story as long as it is good
TheCatLover50 chapter 7 . 9/3/2023
on a scale of crispy to ash how roasted will naruto be when he asks who that big guy in the video was?
freedomringer chapter 7 . 8/23/2023
First Track should be Bowser's castle because this is where Naruto will face the first challenge made all the more dangerous due to his inexperience. Then Yoshi Island where he will make his comeback. Toad Harbor or Mario circuit for the 3rd race, and final race has to be rainbow road where Bowsette and Naruto fight head to head for the championship.
freedomringer chapter 6 . 8/23/2023
Would be awesome if you did Doubles where TenTen is the weapon thrower and Naruto is the driver.
freedomringer chapter 5 . 8/23/2023
Mario Kart with Naruto sounds like fun. Mario Tennis and Soccer are musts now.
freedomringer chapter 3 . 8/23/2023
Thank goodness. My main worry is alleviated. More importantly, this makes me wonder if Peach was once a man too?
freedomringer chapter 1 . 8/23/2023
I hope this isn't a case of he's trapped there forever. This chapter introduced a life for Naruto in Konoha. Taking that away permanently feels like plain cruelty even if he gets and objectively better one in the Mario land
cilantros chapter 7 . 8/20/2023
this is going to be good :D
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