Reviews for Assassins in the Wizarding World
gal chapter 1 . 7/26
good job
Dragon chapter 10 . 7/12
I don’t why, but once we get into book 5 this rating will turn from T-rated to M-rating fast that and I want to see a good or decent Harry Potter lemon fanfic
dork chapter 15 . 7/10
kill the second chance plz update
Omni warrior chapter 15 . 7/11
First I really hope this isn’t one of those bash Ron fanfic but seeing that we’re in book four so eh, but I really hope in book five or in this one at the end Ron apologize and say why he hates slytherin like malfoy family or something like that which would make sense, plus we knew that scene where Ron defends Harry, plus it shows his growth that he will defend Harry no matter what
Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 3 . 7/10
I still don't get how they speak the same language right away... At least explain it with translation charms, lol. It breaks immersion. And esdeath wanting to teach at the school. Again, that breaks immersion so bad. Please do continue writing, but I would like to see some stuff thought out and explained a bit more. Like the whole needing tatsumi to be the champion in the tournament. That wasn't explained at all so it breaks immersion again. When I say that I mean it makes you stop and think "that's super odd, why did that happen" rather than continuing to read
illa30425 chapter 8 . 7/10
Why didn’t the tatsumi simply take em all to the ball?
illa30425 chapter 5 . 7/10
I’m not gonna lie that peck from esdeath was pretty whack but I’ll let is slide cuz this fan fic is kinda cool
illa30425 chapter 2 . 7/10
Bruh I said it once and ill say it again these wizard mo fos don’t stand a chance
illa30425 chapter 1 . 7/10
Ngl I bet they could clap the wizarding world
MrKristoffer1994 chapter 14 . 6/24
Dumbledore, you better start preparing yourself if you want to continue live.
johnberger51 chapter 14 . 6/24
awesome so far
me chapter 13 . 6/13
good job. keep it up my friend!
witchking354 chapter 1 . 6/14
I truly hope Ron and the others be friends again. Doesn't feel right seeing Harry and Ron not being bros.
Drcaus chapter 13 . 6/13
Harry and Ron are always friends through and through in books and movies
WelshDragon18 chapter 12 . 6/13
have Harry go to St. Mugo's, so that way he can get fully healed. Than that way the Horrorcrux that's in his scar can get removed, and than that way Harry won't have to deal with Riddle anymore. Also have it to where Dumbledoor uses the Horrorcrux to track the others down, and so that way they can all be destroyed
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