Damn it! Why did this story not get finished. I loved what you where doing with the maidens and relics. And Nora is just so adorable in this story. I call bullshit that people stopped supporting this story. Shame on them!.

This is a wonderful story a an continuation would be very well received good writing sorry for the lack of a responses.

Why no new chapter for this? I need to know what happens next my sanity demands it! Love the fic please update it soon and I can’t wait for when you do!

oh man i really want to know what happens next!

I hope this story is revived soon. It has such potential for naruto fuckery

This is so good please continue

I need more of this. It’s so good

how old is Naruto, did Kakashi teach Cinder how to fight

I can imagine Qrow laughing at raven for wearing maid outfit

Great story . Love it.

It’s been so long, can you please update this story.

Welp I can see why this story didn’t make it past chapter 12, giving Cinder chakra just rubs me the wrong way

I'm sorry to see if things end soon with your writing cause I really do enjoy your stories. I just don't review cause I just don't have anything really to comment on since the chapter was so good to me. In my opinion. I really do hope that you will continue your stories and that your reviews and readers start coming back to you. But please now I will stick around until the very end and keep enjoying your stories until the next chapter. Peace!

my guess is that Naruto transferred into the rwbyVerse gained a semblance? and you gave him Sunshine from Escanor? it's a badass combo bro. and I can picture naruto with that are. this is wicked

More please, this is a really good story.