Way to much bullshit should have just left it God of War pjo

you should make percy get blessed by kratos

This story seems like it has to undergo a rewrite and that's probably what he's doing since he hasn't updated in 7 months there's the grammar mistakes a couple inconsistencies chapter 23 just makes this seems like it's gonna go all over the place like honestly it's a good story imo I just don't want it to go downhill by adding multiple crossovers I believe you should stick to just God of War X Percy Jackson you already have so much material right there

Percy is gonna get such a huge fucking rapsheet by the time he turns 12, cause Poseidon doesn't know where he is or isn't watching him, by the time the lightning bolt is stolen and it is blamed on Percy, they are definitely gonna think it's him, his Rapsheet is probably gonna, killed Peter pan, is a member or the broken bonez orc clan, and so on and Olympus and Poseidon especially are gonna wonder, WTF has this kid been doing and why isn't he at Camp, they, and by they I mean Zeus will probably send the Hunters after him and maybe some campers, maybe that's how he meets Grover and Annabeth

I recommend you clean up the story because I'm having trouble understanding the lore a bit because I've got no clue if Persephone from Chains of Olympus was Demeter's daughter

Unfortunately I think this is where the fic goes downhill…

While I like crossover stories more then regular universe contained stories there comes a point when it gets confusing when to many crossover universes are involved in a story. This story seems to be going down that path but hopefully while it is still early since the introduction of so many crossovers it’s possible to salvage this before it gets out of hand otherwise this story might end up abandoned or made into a remake like other fanfiction stories I have seen

Even if the big three kept there word it wouldn't stop the destroyer from being born as it said elder six. Also it was stupid for them to swear on the Styx when they can easily break that oath

Nice

Bro i was interested in this story at first but rwby being in it has taken it too far for me. Im tapping out. Good luck with your story

where were u when the embodiment of the earth was kill

“The road to Hell is paved with good intentions.” This is something that Loki nearly went down and someone like Ozpin has gone down and with there being a good chance Percy could go down if he doesn’t listen to Kratos and thinks he knows best like Loki did. Sad fact is that more people throughout history have been killed in the name of justice rather then vengeance and the really bad moments in history usually happen when those in power convince themselves that they know best even when they don’t or they go to far in pursuit of their goal. Frankly I wouldn’t be surprised if those in power in this world when introduced to the power of the different realms powers and weapons try to harness such power for themselves in order to destroy their enemies or just protect their countries but end up making things worse in the end.

It would be terrible for everyone involved if Percy went to Camp Half Blood because those idiots (Olympians) found out the truth of Percy relationship to Kratos they would either try to use Percy against Kratos either as a hostage or a tool against Kratos. The result would be cause massive amounts of damage to the world along with many people getting killed in the crossfire.

Love the chapter.
If Ben does get the Omnitrix, please give him Rath.

This is a rough first chapter... I'm sure the rest, or at least a lot of it, is similar. Might want to look back at this story and do some editing. Maybe doing so will make this a somewhat decent read.

I wonder if you’ll include The Trials of Apollo in your story? And I wonder what will happen if Kratos and Apollo meets again.