Reviews for Banes of Olympus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice chapter. It was pleasant to see the human side of Kratos really shows the difference between how humans think and how the gods do. I do hope to see Kratos just burst into Apollos temple and just slam him. Can't wait for the next chapter keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg wholesome much (ӦvӦ。) |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep up the great work! hope for more chapters |
![]() ![]() poor milo |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAING CHAPTER you are showing (parten the pun) the human side of kratores more and more please make Apollo punish ment inconceivable and make the mear work of Milo make him quivver in fear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how it go from battle with satyr to flashback? |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking hell I was too caught up in this read before I knew it and it ends! There’s so few fics in this crossover section so this is a diamond in the rough. Hopefully you come back to this for future updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea though I would have liked it better if it was just the life he is now and kratos that he will be based off of |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exciting story, love the possibilities it creates for Sally and Kratos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kratos in the story feels rather out of character, compared to even the 2018 God of War. I mean, it makes sense, but to use words like "Nice"? He'd rather have his liver eaten in my opinion. Kratos was always the broody, tough guy with little words to speak, but I suppose the new behavior makes sense since he lived several lives, and has their memories resurfacing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so the problems I've seen so far are grammatical errors, spelling mistakes and lack of partitioning between story segments. Honestly, it's not that bad, but it can be much better. Your story's concept is interesting and I hope it continues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter could have been better, maybe some more flashbacks of Kratos' memories, especially when he sees romance. And of course past trauma. Noticed some parts where wording or spacing could have been done better, and the only question I have is, when in the world did his name change from Jacob to Carson? There was literally no transition or warning to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |