Reviews for Banes of Olympus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() either Percy becomes the adopted son of Kratos or Percy goes to Kratos to be trained meaning he finds out what Kratos is at some point in his life |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny five minutes ago i was wondering what would happen if the olympians were reborn into the reordan versions of themselves and what would happen if kratos was a thing in that world |
![]() ![]() ![]() On one hand the talking isn't the best, and the flashbacks are distracting. One the other the premise looks real good. It's not often you see a God of War fic. Let alone one where Kratos isn't murder, kill everyone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hell the way they talk are children |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Rates M for Mature" yet the way the characters act are children |
![]() ![]() ![]() im not really happy with it. its too ooc and in terms of medical treatment you definitely didnt do any research. grammar is the same as last time |
![]() ![]() ![]() your grammar definitely needs a beta or something. i found ore than a few spelling and grammar mistakes but otherwise you did ok |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's an interesting fanfic, how often do you update it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Percy the new bane? He defeated Ares at 12 so he has the potential |